FREESTYLE DaBOSS vs Da King
 

Battle Rules:

10-15 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-20-05 at 07:50 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Da King has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-19-05 07:51 PM.

FREESTYLE DaBOSS has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-19-05 07:52 PM.

I’m a classic like history art
dis guy couldn’t have mo’ hits den me if he had sex with the charts
you see I’ll leave his screws loose…. I’m crazy niggas
I’ma put this rappa to bed like baby sitta’s
you sof like chinchilla….yo styles aint raw
cuz you being big is just an illusion like wonder bras
I bring da thunder dawg I’m like zeus in dis fight
Being raped by *MJ is the only time you’ll be on a *mic.(mike)
Don’t claim to be hype cuz I’ll hit ya hard
Man I naw seen betta wrappa’s (rappa’s) on snicker bars
Equipped wit’ bars when I thro em bitch listen
You don’t stand a chance like a turkey at thanksgiving
You can’t hurt me I cause beef like jerkys
Think you tight watch the crowd thro’ ya back like jerseys
You see this dude stay unda my feet like dirt
Cuz the only time he’ll spit sumthin’ hot is repeating my verse

*Mj, micheal jackson. C'mon now. If you didn't get that line don't vote.

KING you about to get folded like some new skool klothes/
you making me break the pimp kode,kuz usually I'm kool wit you hoez/I'll hit yo ass so hard an you won't even see it koming/yo homies will be like "Damn He Got Knocked Da Fuk Out" then take off running/KING you jus a woman trap'd in a lil kids body/you a kross between the serprano's an a fake ass john gotti/
you ain't gon hurt nobody or let nothing get hurt/don't be mad at me kuz I keeps it street an you ain't never put in work/
I'll rush yo bitchass to the dirt beat you down then leave you for dead/I'll shut down ya whole kamp then place a stamp that says "TAPOUT" on ya forehead/kuz lil hoes run skur'd when the pressure in the pot starts to boil/you ain't never represented a turf but I was the first to represent my soil/you don't want beef
like the meat was spoiled/rotten,have yo ass picking
kotton/for400 years of slavery,bitch I'm like Danny Glover kuz I ain't never Forgotten/

uppin............................................. ................

Voted For: Da King

freestyledaboss-WOW, terrible structure, a few punches but hardly any and the ones you had were wack...strecthed lines, bad flow, and thats about it, lol...elevate kid

da king-try to make your lines more even cuz they didnt match in length, lmao at some of the punches though, they were funny, liked the mj one and the bra one, lol...

overall-
opener:da boss
closer:tie
flow:king
structure:king
punches:king

v/da king

thnx. i'll return the favor. hit me up with a link you need me to check out.

Voted For: Da King

king gets the vote on this cuz i thought he came harder...and the other verse was hard to follow with its structure

thnx for the support. i'll return the favor one day.

AYE, DA KING DIDNT WIN THIS BATTLE, THE HE LACK OFF, I UNDERSTAND HE WON, BUT ITS ALL GRAVY

:thumbup: WURD UP KING

uppin.............................................

This was feedback posted for FREESTYLE DaBOSS
 

Jus inspectin daboss.........

Seein how he battles.....U need 2 improve ya structure and line length..!!!!!

Voted For: Da King

Should I even fuckin explain this??

King killed it with his consistency in punches and wordplay.

Da Boss, ya structure sucked, which fucked with ya flow, which made me not really wanna read your verse

v/ da king

uppin...........come on mutha fukaz vote. all u got do is type who u think won and y. it aint dat hard. cmon pleaze close dis battle.