20 grand freestyle
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/6/20grand.htm
MAry J beat i got bored, self explanitory.... LINKS: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191068 http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190120 |
aight yo ya lyrics seemed a lil basic 2 me wasnt realli nothin i wuld brag bout quality was kool and ya flow on it was kool
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For some reason it sound like your trying to deep by making ya voice deep
Cant say much but this but its a good freestyle you flowed on beat |
not supposed to be mad lyrical.. its a freestyle....
thats my natural speaking voice actually, cuz i recorded this late last night |
yo.....dope freestyle.......u dont scared to freestyle........keep it up......yo....
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peepin.. lol ur voice duz sound mad different on this lol duz sound like u tryin to come off deep or sumn.. damn that 2 burners line was another reuse same with swisher line... when u do ur pause then come back in its a lil better... speakers bleed line was a straight up bite tho... well this was alot different from ya normal shyt like i dunno if ur tryin sumthin different but ya voice seemed more REAL and Normal on this but soundin more geeky at tha same time, i dunnno how much of a FRee this was but seems like it was just thrown together real quick with some old recycled lines n thrown out, ferreal tha only advice i could offer is to start getting new material cuz u be usin ya lines over n over n over on everytrack, i actualy think i like this voice better tho, more natural, u seemed kinda monotone on sum parts tho lol at ur stop to talk about mike jones n collect ur thoughts lol i think this wasnt a freestyle but u shouldnt care what i think rite? word... drop sum new shyt tho..
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yo what up... hurry up an spit it... fuck a intro,... haha... flow is on point, hard not to be in a freestyle tho... lyrical is coo for off tha dome... keep it gutta...
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you sound funny
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