My Life(real deep shit)
 

aight its not da whole version just a preview of dis song im doin its kind of hot

My Life-Lo Fi

My Life-Hi Fi

My Life


feedbakk
http://community.rapverse.com/showt...d=1#post2162035
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191407

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Aiight emotional beat...
I think ya quality could be better..lyrics are nice and deep..sounds like your too close to the mic..memorize ya verse first it sound like your reading from paper...the flow is off

And learn how to mix, and caught of beat you could've either added another verse or cuaght the beat off

aight thanx 4 da feed upppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnn

LOL i know your alias.....but yea i talked to you on AIM....haha i woulda never guessed you were...well...your other name....lyrics are pretty good...but quality is bad...could be a pretty good song if it had good quality.....

yeah....the vocals were a bit muffled.....

outstanding flow.....original style.....not too bad overall.....

your flow was real gud

your voice seemed monotone.....ehhh overall u jus need upp everything u got gud potential

yeah u got some mad potential with tihs...tight beat...good shit homie...keep it up..

lyrics are good, but it does sound like your to close to the mic but thats not that bad, it dont make it sound horrible, it still sounds good, it does sound like your reading your lyrics just memorize or just make it sound like you have it memorized, but its still good, i liked it pretty much, i look forward to more from you man...

dam thanks yall wen i get a new mic i'll do this ova so u can hurr it betta

yeh the beat is on the emotional vibe
flow is coo
quality i think just needs to be upped a bit
vocals were low tho, needs to be just fit all nice with the quality
delivery could be upped also
but it got potential man!
coo lyrics
keep it up