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Carlton Banks 05-20-05 12:59 PM

Ice-D vs Carlton Banks
 
Battle Rules:
8 lines
No crew votes
No recycling
No biting
No d/r
No hate

Minimum posts to vote: 350

Check in by: 05-23-05 at 12:59 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

System 05-20-05 12:59 PM

Ice-D has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-20-05 12:59 PM.

System 05-20-05 01:11 PM

Carlton Banks has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-20-05 01:11 PM.

Carlton Banks 05-20-05 01:30 PM

your nothing to me, i'd rip you and still have a hunger for more.
cuz your better off as an unlucky skater, so start leaving the board.
i'm flexing my muscles, and spitting off my dome till' my hairs gone.
and your skills are like radio battles, they nothing to swear on.
your respected, maybe because your a good all round emcee.
but you'll find out personally, that you have no edge-on-me.
not alot of personals i'm throwing, but i'm still halting your game.
they say losings a bitch, but thats weird :confused: how'd they know your name!


if you don't get the wordplay/anything...then please, don't vote :thumbup:.
g/l ice-d.

King Solo 05-20-05 01:42 PM


Bitch got no ballz, Carlton’s a woman..I’ll ‘thump-her’ like beatin Disney rabbits…*
We tryin to create a RAP battle..but Carlton is a fuckin Tom Jones addict…
Ya spits make me ‘board’, ya only steppin on me when I make ya walk the plank…
Spits ain’t rich in Bel-Air, accepting battles are the only cheques Carlton Banks…
Dude wanna believe he’s a playa, ya never get there as a Carlton Banks mimic…
Cuz the only time that Carlton hits a phat ass is when he’s spankin Phillip…
Blaze by you at such a speed it’ll be like ya just rolled into the past…
Carlton, in this battle ya Jazzy Jeff the way I got you thrown out on ya ass…


* Walt Disney film “Bambi” – the rabbit in it is called “Thumper”

Restricted 05-20-05 05:49 PM

This was feedback posted for Carlton Banks
 
Checkin Polls..

Decent Verse Man....Like Ya 2nd Bar Fasho.

~R~

Carlton Banks 05-20-05 06:45 PM

lets get some votes in this bitch, i seem to be always getting feed lol damn.

King Solo 05-20-05 07:36 PM

yes, get some votes so i can own this chumpstain!!!!!

Carlton Banks 05-21-05 04:52 AM

lol, nice verse. but you had a played line which is a no no...upping.

King Solo 05-21-05 03:58 PM

fuck you hoe..........ya verse was some of the weakest shit i seen

all basic rhymes, played shit, nuthin overly creative no real punches

i'd be shocked if ya got one vote................this is an easy KO!!!

13th. 05-21-05 04:08 PM

Voted For: Ice-D

your nothing to me, i'd rip you and still have a hunger for more.
cuz your better off as an unlucky skater, so start leaving the board.
OK
i'm flexing my muscles, and spitting off my dome till' my hairs gone.
and your skills are like radio battles, they nothing to swear on.
NO.....
your respected, maybe because your a good all round emcee.
but you'll find out personally, that you have no edge-on-me.
SHIT
not alot of personals i'm throwing, but i'm still halting your game.
they say losings a bitch, but thats weird how'd they know your name!
GOOD
=7/10 AN OK VERSE BUT I WAS EXPECTIN BETTER......

VS


Bitch got no ballz, Carlton’s a woman..I’ll ‘thump-her’ like beatin Disney rabbits…*
We tryin to create a RAP battle..but Carlton is a fuckin Tom Jones addict…
GOOD.....
Ya spits make me ‘board’, ya only steppin on me when I make ya walk the plank…
Spits ain’t rich in Bel-Air, accepting battles are the only cheques Carlton Banks…
NICE.....
Dude wanna believe he’s a playa, ya never get there as a Carlton Banks mimic…
Cuz the only time that Carlton hits a phat ass is when he’s spankin Phillip…
LOL.......
Blaze by you at such a speed it’ll be like ya just rolled into the past…
Carlton, in this battle ya Jazzy Jeff the way I got you thrown out on ya ass…
nICE
=8.5/10 A REALI TITE VERSE, SOME GOOD PUNCHES.......

V/ICE-D

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

King Solo 05-22-05 09:17 AM

uppin..................weren't you Delaware yesterday.................

13th. 05-22-05 09:48 AM

Yep lol u noticed.................................

E.C 05-22-05 11:45 AM

This was feedback posted for Ice-D
 
one sided battle i think... i cant vote coz ice is in the same crew... so imma leave some feed...

carlton u had some good lines but u fell off near the end i think u ran out of things to say maybe?

ice u stayed consistant and hard throughout the whole verse u had some solid funny punches in there man keep droppin...

id i could vote then i would vote got ice.. pz

Ryan Hughes 05-22-05 12:23 PM

Voted For: Ice-D

V/Ice-d......this was a good battle but ice came wit the punchs an personals that wrapped up this battle his structure was on point....
Carlton... came wit a good verse u had some good punchs but nuthin to special alot of played ones...but u did have a good closer an structure...work on those things........NO Hate.............RETURN THE FAVOR.....
Opener=I
Closer=tie
Punchs=I
Structure=tie
personals=I
vocab=C
Multi's=Tie(none really)
Werdplay=I
Overall=Ice-D

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