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H-N-I-C 05-20-05 07:29 PM

Crunchtime
 
First, Second, Third
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Suited up wit shoulder pads vision tinted by a visor
Semi-finals playoff game...team expectin me to take em higher
See I'm tha captain quarterbackin, leadin my team onto tha field
Newspapers said this team would have us back on our heels
Wet field...yard markers...white paint no longer fresh
Fan filled stands...onto tha field we ran to stretch
Band playin, drums boomin, trumpets blarin to tha max
Crowd cheerin, kickoff time, my team's back to make tha catch
first quarter, second quarter.....locker room for halftime
Start of tha third quarter, time to get back on tha grind
Score tied at 21...quarter ended...game on tha line
Step it up...let's get it on, fourth quarter...CRUNCHTIME
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Fourth Quarter
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Two minutes left they got tha ball, threw it downfield for tha reception
End Zone.....Jump ball......we both go up.....interception
Clock runnin down but we marchin, only one timeout left
Option right, got tha first and almost ran into tha ref
We on tha thirty yard line and now tha clock's runnin down
Fumbled tha snap off of my leg but covered it once it hit tha ground
Coach called tha final timeout after I covered tha ball
Now we're outta field goal range...gotta go for it all
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Crunchtime
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Destiny is in my hands as I take tha final snap
They pressure me as I advance...Blitz comin for tha sack
Safety comin up tha gut...I tell my back to pick it up
TRIPS RIGHT ON TWO...READY SET...HUT HUT
Helmets collided...pads crashed, defense comin but I dashed
Forty time so damn fast that my team nicknamed me flash
I kept my cool as titans clashed, took a step up in tha pocket
Scanned tha field ...no open options, so I took of like a rocket
Got niggaz tryna catch me...I hear breathin like Darth Vader
But it didn't really matter, cuz I took tha ball forty yards to payder


Payder = Pay dirt (football term for getting into tha end zone)

H-N-I-C 05-20-05 07:34 PM

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191587

H-N-I-C 05-20-05 11:29 PM

uppin this...lets get some feed

H-N-I-C 05-21-05 12:11 PM

Uppin anotha good time...leave some feed please

H-N-I-C 05-22-05 01:44 AM

Come on, somebody...anybody...leave feedback

mizz fyre 05-22-05 08:02 AM

hmmm a pretty decent drop....imagery was nice but i found the concept a bit boring.....story was to straightforward y'know.....but you had nice structure and your flow was good 7/10

MADDRAPPER 05-22-05 09:30 AM

yeh i agree story a little boring almost knew what was gonna happen but th egood thing is you got skills and keep it up it's very hard to write a story like this but you succeeded enjoyed reading it

H-N-I-C 05-22-05 02:47 PM

Thanx for tha honesty...uppin


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