Souljah vs FREESTYLE DaBOSS
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-22-05 at 11:19 AM

Must drop verse in 60 minutes after check in.

Souljah has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-21-05 11:30 AM.

FREESTYLE DaBOSS has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-21-05 11:40 AM.

Me n you both know every night you pray dat,
Niggas don't be findin out dat you be a fake cat,you
Couldn't fuck wid me under any circumstance,cos
Nigga you be faker than a barbie doll wid implants,
Yo you ain't got da potential to beat me,
I could outrhyme you while i'm talkin in my sleep g,
Lyrically you weaker than a watered down 40 ounce,
Yo man there ain't no room for fakes so you outta bounce,
If i was in charge id make bein wack a crime,meanin
You'd be strapped down wid volts burnin through your mind...

All you niggaz got tha same flow/
so what you up in the game fo?/
knowing I'ma shine like a pot of gold at the end of that rainbow/
yo style iz jus a "re-run" an I'm like"Whatz Happening"/
its time ya let this real playa thru so I kan get it on an krackin/I'm known 4 mackin,an pimp slap'n
bitches like goldie/I put that on my dead homiez,half ya'll don't wanna kno me/
you kouldn't show me nothing that I ain't seen
yet/rappers say alot shit to get a rekord deal
but they don't mean it/I smoke that sticky green
shit until my eye'z are tight like virgin pussy/
I been doing this shit fo a while now,bitch I
ain't no rookie/you thank it took me this long
to kraft my skills in vein?/you thank yo momma
won't start to vommit as she witness inflick tha
pain?/DaBOss be digg'n off in yo brain like
surgery/these rappers say alot of bullshit about me
but they words never be hurting me/kuz I love working
these weak emcee's like prostitutes,you take it on
yo kneez/standing ova you is right where I wanna
be when I squirt an squeeze the trigger rapidly
like when I sneeze/nigga please,ad-ease before
you make me go on some next level shit/hit yo
block wit heavy metal shit,kuz I'ma rebel bitch/

Voted For: Souljah

souljah- you had a better rap...didnt like your structure however...but the verse was good

daboss- i didnt like your structure...kinda confusing to follow.

Voted For: Souljah

Iight I Dont Even Really Need'a Explain Why, But SOULJAH Evidently Got Da Win Herre, SOULJAH U Culd Fix Yo Structre A Little An Rhyme Like.,..Line After Line, So The End Rhymes Are Da Last Word Of The Linez, But Datz Not Much Of A Fault I Culd Still Read It Iight An It Flowed Well...U EZ Took This One, Good Job An YO!...Hit Up Da Battlez In Mah Signature

Yo uppin for more votes people............................................ .....

Yo Souljah
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^^^^^^^
Or I Will Have My Vote Removed Frum Here [sorry 2 come across as a prick but u kno how it is dawg]

Voted For: Souljah

souljah had dis shit from da beginin...all yo shit
juss sounded hella better...it flowed better,better
vocab,erthing was so much nicer....and "DABOSS"
needs to work on his structa cause dat shit sucked
votes up for you "SOULJAH" but good try BOSS

Uppin for more votes.Lets keep the voting goin people...................................

Voted For: Souljah

Me n you both know every night you pray dat,
Niggas don't be findin out dat you be a fake cat,you
^^filler, n the you at the end of ya 2nd bar shouldnt be there
Couldn't fuck wid me under any circumstance,cos
Nigga you be faker than a barbie doll wid implants,
^^ok, decent bar...but that cos thingy,stop doing that
Yo you ain't got da potential to beat me,
I could outrhyme you while i'm talkin in my sleep g,
^^nope..
Lyrically you weaker than a watered down 40 ounce,
Yo man there ain't no room for fakes so you outta bounce,
^^no, use another diss"not always fake"
If i was in charge id make bein wack a crime,meanin
You'd be strapped down wid volts burnin through your mind...
setup was decent, punch lacked
.
other verse had no punches, he wasnt even talkin about his opponent that he was battlin..
.
barbie doll implants was the only punch n it was weak
both work on that

Voted For: FREESTYLE DaBOSS

F.Boss you came out strong wit the punchlines and gave sum good rhymes n' flow your structure wasnt very good but in overall you were good

Souljah you got nice rhymes n' flow but you didnt hav many punchlines so that shit got you down

rtf....v.F.Boss

Voted For: Souljah

Souljah gets this for comin harder wit the punches, best bar was the barbie one, gfunny shit.

You need to work on structure a little bit and try and pack multis in ya bars.

Free
you need to change your structure and use punches, its costing you badly. I aint hatin on ya but seriousely read some tutorials and shit.

Souljah rtf in sig in 3 days or i DQ this vote!!