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_JooKsta_ vs kelsick39
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10 - 12 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-22-05 at 02:57 AM Must drop verse in 30 minutes after check in. |
_JooKsta_ has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-21-05 11:58 PM.
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imma just spit sick,diss this prick lightnin quick....
0r hit em wit bullets thicker then the fingaz he typen wit... i d0nt think u g0t skillz,u prolly just beginin... rap isnt ya hobby,i can tell u be singin.. dreamin tryna reach levels of greatness,shinen wit fake bracelets... u not a thug,ta prove ya point u type up fake cases... ya sista m0re 0f a man then u i heard,so trade places.. u wear lip gloss n make up,she dont, so trade faces... u d0nt want da AK ta leave u shitten in a bag soon... plus da only ink u good wit is writen ya manz name fa tattooz... |
kelsick39 has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 12:24 AM.
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y even try to get me rattled, no chance at stealin my thunder whore
cuz U know ur losin this battle..... ur surrounded by Underscores Ur just gettin around, like sluts always bendin it down RV is fittin for u, were like fuck it, just Send in the CLowns wat u think im scared of cat? thinkin that i can barely rap cuz I would do a flip on ur name, if u hadnt taken care of that thinks hes God of Destruction, but trust this, u aint that worthy Unless ur talkin about quittin the battle, since gods are about that Mercy Atleast he admits that Kel's Sick wit Wordplay, he's fearin this guy laughin so hard off of my verse, its bringin tears to his eyes i unno wat else to say, im drunk, ur wack, this battle is no hope his lines like missin punchlines cuz we told him "to cut out the jokes" lmao, thisll be good |
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Voted For: kelsick39
LoL Nice BAttle! but Vote:Kelsick .................................................. .......... y even try to get me rattled, no chance at stealin my thunder whore cuz U know ur losin this battle..... ur surrounded by Underscores ^alright 7/10 Ur just gettin around, like sluts always bendin it down RV is fittin for u, were like fuck it, just Send in the CLowns ^iight7/10 wat u think im scared of cat? thinkin that i can barely rap cuz I would do a flip on ur name, if u hadnt taken care of that LoL^8/10 thinks hes God of Destruction, but trust this, u aint that worthy Unless ur talkin about quittin the battle, since gods are about that Mercy ^6.5/10 Atleast he admits that Kel's Sick wit Wordplay, he's fearin this guy laughin so hard off of my verse, its bringin tears to his eyes ^7/10 i unno wat else to say, im drunk, ur wack, this battle is no hope his lines like missin punchlines cuz we told him "to cut out the jokes" LoL^8/10 ......................... jook ........................ imma just spit sick,diss this prick lightnin quick.... 0r hit em wit bullets thicker then the fingaz he typen wit... LoL Nice^8.5/10 i d0nt think u g0t skillz,u prolly just beginin... rap isnt ya hobby,i can tell u be singin.. ^?6/10 dreamin tryna reach levels of greatness,shinen wit fake bracelets... u not a thug,ta prove ya point u type up fake cases... ^7/10 ya sista m0re 0f a man then u i heard,so trade places.. u wear lip gloss n make up,she dont, so trade faces... ^7/10 u d0nt want da AK ta leave u shitten in a bag soon... plus da only ink u good wit is writen ya manz name fa tattooz... ^6.5/10 ........................ overall-- 7/10-8.5 <jook/1st linez 7/10-6/10 <Kel/2nd 8/10-7/10 <kel/3rd 6.5-7/10 <Jook/4th 7/10-6.5 <Kel/5th CLOSE VERY CLOSE but my vote goes to Kel .................... I Alwayz Vote Honestly .................................. |
This was feedback posted for _JooKsta_
Jus check out da battle
Jook make all ur lines da same length!!!!! |
chea,chea good lookin out on da vote GhoSt....and good lookin on da hint Paradox
upin fa m0re v0tes.... |
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Voted For: kelsick39
jooksta: imma just spit sick,diss this prick lightnin quick.... 0r hit em wit bullets thicker then the fingaz he typen wit... ^^^EHH DECENT OPENER... i d0nt think u g0t skillz,u prolly just beginin... rap isnt ya hobby,i can tell u be singin.. ^^^REAL WACK dreamin tryna reach levels of greatness,shinen wit fake bracelets... u not a thug,ta prove ya point u type up fake cases... ^^^LOL...HELL NO ya sista m0re 0f a man then u i heard,so trade places.. u wear lip gloss n make up,she dont, so trade faces... ^^WHUT????? u d0nt want da AK ta leave u shitten in a bag soon... plus da only ink u good wit is writen ya manz name fa tattooz... ^^^^AWWW MAN FAM....WHUT R DOIN LOL....U DIDN'T HAVE A HOT LINE IN YA WHOLE VERSE...REAL TALK NO HATE kelsick: y even try to get me rattled, no chance at stealin my thunder whore cuz U know ur losin this battle..... ur surrounded by Underscores ^^^^LOL GOOD PERSONAL.. Ur just gettin around, like sluts always bendin it down RV is fittin for u, were like fuck it, just Send in the CLowns ^^^DA FLOW WAS GOOD..BUT DA PUNCHLINE DIDN'T REALLY HIT DAT HARD wat u think im scared of cat? thinkin that i can barely rap cuz I would do a flip on ur name, if u hadnt taken care of that ^^^GOOD USE OF DA MULTIS..AND PERSONAL thinks hes God of Destruction, but trust this, u aint that worthy Unless ur talkin about quittin the battle, since gods are about that Mercy ^^UUHH OKAY Atleast he admits that Kel's Sick wit Wordplay, he's fearin this guy laughin so hard off of my verse, its bringin tears to his eyes ^^^NAH i unno wat else to say, im drunk, ur wack, this battle is no hope his lines like missin punchlines cuz we told him "to cut out the jokes" ^^^WEAK CLOSER... V/KELSICK...JOOKSTA U CANT BE MADD FAM YA VERSE WAS REAL WEAK RETURN DA FAVOR....AND EXPLAIN YA VOTE LIKE I DID 4 YA'LL BATTLE |
Nah G i AinT MaD...i KnOw WhaT i DiD WRoNg...BuT GoOd LoOkiN oUt On Da HoNeSt VoTe aNd GoOd ExPLaiNaTioN....
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Voted For: _JooKsta_
Jooksta: ok good structure liked ya punches it was iight openor was also good your closer was aslo good it was a good battle between ya but you came on top of him......................you're verse it was good man gotta give you props wen its due kelsick: your verse was iight it was not as good as jooksta ya punches was also good it was an ok structure and you stayed on point too bad you didnt end up on top v/jooksta I gotta give it to you please return the favor: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=2167988 |
^^^^^ i really doubted anyone would think he won........ but u can have ur opinion
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looook........ isnt this battle so cool!?!?!? vote people
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