I Miss You ( R.I.P Grandfather )
 

I replied to the Black Dragon and B-Mac joints...and a couple others.....

song i wrote a while ago..when i wrote it my flow wasnt as good...not that it is good now...but definitely better...so excuse some of the flow...its a lil off in a couple parts...most wont really be able to tell though...this song means a lot to me....just because my grandad meant a tremendous amount to me...so...this is it...i may do a 3rd verse...im not sure....SoundClick link is in SIG!

some really emotional shit...okay vocab...u flowed good and i have ta say once more lots of emotion......8.5/10

Flow is aite...


Lyrics could be betta, flow was on and off, beat was nice u used nas shit........
Emotions i could feel i could relate to this topic...

Overall well done

^ its a Game beat.....just lettin u know...but thanks for the feed

beat is coo lol very emotional...i can relate to this also....quality is ehhhhhhh but u proly already know....flow was off and on overall this gud.....stay up keep using cool edit youll get way better word

a yo this shit is clean man the hook is hott, only thing wrong is the quality, but thats a problem most of us have, vocals should be up a little higher also good song though

thanks for the feed ECKO n GK....much appreciated

Very emotional beat...

Lyrics are very deep, and Im very dorry for your loss...I can tell he meant alot to you man but hold ya head fam

Flow sounded fine to me...

Nice shit man

R.I.P.

^ thanks a lot.......

figured i would up this since i been gone for a while....

Beat is nice, real emotional...Sorry bout ya grampa...lyrics are deep and heartfelt...no doubt feeling this...

RIP