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Sean Gunner 05-22-05 03:12 AM

The Revelation vs @.
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 36 Lines
Crew Votes Allowed
No Recycling
No Biting
No Feeding (taking my idea)

Minimum posts to vote: 350

Check in by: 05-24-05 at 03:12 AM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Sean Gunner 05-22-05 03:13 AM

Topic: Church's Rejection

Forgot to say that. My bad..

System 05-22-05 03:15 AM

The Revelation has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 03:15 AM.

Sean Gunner 05-22-05 03:40 AM

Song style. 8 bars per verse, 1 1/2 bars for the refrain.

Verse 1
Night started off great talked with girl for 3 hours straight,
Had already planned on what to do for next week's date.
Took a shower got dressed and ready to go to the bash,
Mom said I might need something to get in so she gave me some cash.
Got to the place it was supposed to be but the party is gone,
Search the entire college campus, nothing, something is wrong.
We circle round the back lot finding college prom with stretched rides,
Guys in their suits, girls in their dresses, I can hear the music and fun outside.
But I need to get to the party for me to meet my friends and prizes,
Finally we stop a cop and ask for directions, he said we were right beside it.
Steam comes out of the ground through the manhole cover creepy,
I am wide awake to try and find this place, mom is kind of sleepy.
Finally we find the building and the party has just begun,
Time to go inside and see who is waiting for me and what kind of fun.


Hook:
Church's rejection deflection overall correction,
Intervention to a nation needing a readjusted dedication.
Not to mention what I say nothing to a person's perception,


Verse 2
Party begins blasting swing music making you 'Feel Good',
Like you had prayed that this night could make you feel like you should.
Hour into music, dancing, and enjoyment of time,
Call the mom and let her know that she can sleep, everything is fine.
But things turn downhill here and now the troubles begin to arise,
Ask your friend to dance, says no, and now you ask why.
'Oh its not you, I promise, I just don't want to dance tonight',
Ya, that is why you danced with that guy before, right?
Fuck you Paige and your lying ass can suck on a dick then spit it out,
I know you've done it before so why do you lie and say you won't?
On to the other friend but she says no, again it's not you,
So you danced with some guy just because you got bored and wanted something to do?
Fuck you Megan and your self esteem is fake just like ya breasts,
Bitch I was nice saying you looked nice, you resemble dirt at best.
Ask two others same answer, but only one holds true to their promise,
5 people, 4 answers the same and only was actually honest.


Hook:
Church's rejection deflection overall correction,
Intervention to a nation needing a readjusted dedication.
Not to mention what I say nothing to a person's perception,


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