Skitzo vs P.aradox
 

Battle Rules:

6 Lines
Crew Votes Allowed
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-22-05 at 03:05 PM

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P.aradox has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 02:39 PM.

Skitzo has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 02:52 PM.

Bitch be like the shit on my shoe,watch while u get wiped on the floor……
Left LL cuz he didn’t fit da standard, now no1 wants this bitch no more…
Nah forget that, I’ll upgrade you to my shoe, cause you still be underneath…..
Cuz he read the first 2 lines,started doin flips and ‘Skitzed’ found it hard 2 breath……
Ur punches are to soft, will be slippin of me, like im a plate n ur punches r the water…..
Cuz u’ll be S.erverly K.lose to death I.njury T.reatment ZO.ne cuz uve been slaughtered……...

Anotha quick quick 4 a bit of elevation.......

If u dont get it, dont vote!!!!!!

Nice verse dawg uppin for votes....................

Rule change cuz i thought we were in da same crew.........

No CREW VOTES..........

\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\\^^nice verse g'luck//////////////////

is da rule change ok wi u?????????????????????????

yea no doubt......................................

Voted For: Skitzo

Nice Versez For Both of Yall!
Vote:Skitzo
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Skitzo Ur Structure Was Pretty,Wordplay Pretty Basic,Punches Were Pretty Good,Personalz Alright
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Paradox I Didnt Vote Against u Cuz We Had beef!
ur Verse I Was Feelin 2! Structure Was kind Of Off,Wordplay PRetty Good,Punches iight,Personalz Not 2 Good!
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Punches>Skitz
Wordplay>Skits
Personalz>Tie
Rhymez Scheme>Skits
Structure>Skitz
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Nice verse Both Of Yall!
pleaz pleaz Return Da Favor>>
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191658

This was feedback posted for Skitzo
 

Good verse skitzo u got this win in the bag ..6FEET thats how we do.......uppppin for the famz..........

Voted For: P.aradox

ight close battle here imma break it down....

skitzo...

Your own Blood stains left on you like an old throw back
To know a dude he has to know you everyone knows that
^^ good opener alryt punch... 6/10
But had to be a fag to just go ahead and point(.) it out
But know one knows you, or what the fuck you’re all about
^^ played conecept had potential thogh 5/10
You fruity fuck, you’re the incarnation of Sponge Bob dude
Cuz hopefully you can absorb at least half the skills when I spit on you
^^ nicee line decent wordplay 7/10

overall i gfive you 18/30 u have got potentail just keep practising and you will get far u only had one dicent punch in the whole verse and the rest of it was what brought u down just stay consistant thropught your battle and u will wi... flwo and structure was decent though....

P.aradox

Bitch be like the shit on my shoe,watch while u get wiped on the floor……
Left LL cuz he didn’t fit da standard, now no1 wants this bitch no more…
^^ good opener decent punch 6/10
Nah forget that, I’ll upgrade you to my shoe, cause you still be underneath…..
Cuz he read the first 2 lines,started doin flips and ‘Skitzed’ found it hard 2 breath……
^^ alryyt punch not effective though 5/10
Ur punches are to soft, will be slippin of me, like im a plate n ur punches r the water…..
Cuz u’ll be S.erverly K.lose to death I.njury T.reatment ZO.ne cuz uve been slaughtered……...
^^ decent closure good name play and good punch 8/10

overall i give u
19/20 u just skraped this but you came out on top overall it was a gd verse u have got potential to be super dope just keep wrkin on your punches and you will get there


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Fanx dawg 4 the REAL vote..........

Uppin this joint 4 votes!!!!!!!!!

Uppin for some votes...................................