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Hack dot vs Skriptz
Battle Rules:
10 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No Hate No Bullshit No Dickriding 3-0 K.O. Minimum posts to vote: 250 Check in by: 05-22-05 at 03:13 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. Win by 3-0 KO |
Hack dot has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 02:45 PM.
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Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-22-05 02:45 PM.
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Skriptz, I'd tell you to reach my level, but you can't open the door.
So I'll open it for you, & drive you through it and put a new look on the board! This geek'll weep, when he see's I've just dropped better.. Than him.. Because the way I shred Skriptz, I'm reffered to as a angry director! You want to see lyrical accelaration, so Skriptz awaits his fate. But I don't measure my speed, cuz' I'll beat you at any rate. We all anticipate your drops, but we know it's wack as shit. So I'll kill two bird's with one stone, & throw his verse back @ him. Skriptz a commercial fool, busts the bling bling tryna be cool.. But the only decent video you'd make, is of you flossing my family jewels! |
Coming w/ punches.. but we both know their not gonna hit
How can your rhymes end.. when there’s nothing to begin with Leaving this kid hurt.. so when u walk.. u’ll be limpin & ur bout to get killed.. now Hack dot.. aint worth flippin Even though I know ur wack.. ur verses are the same Never felt ya punches.. like went out & bought Novocain Stop being a faggot.. ur ego shows me that ur full of urself Cuz Rv read your punches.. & put them back on the book-shelf Lets get this over with.. bout to beat u in a quick flash & if I wanted to throw something away.. ........................I would throw ur rhymes in the trash ... |
This was feedback posted for Skriptz
Skriptz, I'd tell you to reach my level, but you can't open the door.
So I'll open it for you, & drive you through it and put a new look on the board! 7/10 catchy an ok openor This geek'll weep, when he see's I've just dropped better.. Than him.. Because the way I shred Skriptz, I'm reffered to as a angry director! 8/10 creative nice punch line You want to see lyrical accelaration, so Skriptz awaits his fate. But I don't measure my speed, cuz' I'll beat you at any rate. 4/10 didn’t like it as much We all anticipate your drops, but we know it's wack as shit. So I'll kill two bird's with one stone, & throw his verse back @ him. 7/10 it was a punch Skriptz a commercial fool, busts the bling bling tryna be cool.. But the only decent video you'd make, is of you flossing my family jewels! 7/10 it was a good closer liked the last part [b]Overall: 33/50 Coming w/ punches.. but we both know their not gonna hit How can your rhymes end.. when there’s nothing to begin with 8/10 I like the 2nd line good bar Leaving this kid hurt.. so when u walk.. u’ll be limpin & ur bout to get killed.. now Hack dot.. aint worth flippin 7/10 its ok not that good nice Even though I know ur wack.. ur verses are the same Never felt ya punches.. like went out & bought Novocain 7/10 again nice Stop being a faggot.. ur ego shows me that ur full of urself Cuz Rv read your punches.. & put them back on the book-shelf 7/10 ok Lets get this over with.. bout to beat u in a quick flash & if I wanted to throw something away.. ........................I would throw ur rhymes in the trash 5/10 wack closer Overal: 34/50 Vote: Skriptz Please return the favor http://community.rapverse.com/showb...d.php?p=2167988 |
Voted For: Skriptz
Coming w/ punches.. but we both know their not gonna hit How can your rhymes end.. when there’s nothing to begin with funny punch^ Leaving this kid hurt.. so when u walk.. u’ll be limpin & ur bout to get killed.. now Hack dot.. aint worth flippin yeah..ok Even though I know ur wack.. ur verses are the same Never felt ya punches.. like went out & bought Novocain meh.... Stop being a faggot.. ur ego shows me that ur full of urself Cuz Rv read your punches.. & put them back on the book-shelf didnt really hit Lets get this over with.. bout to beat u in a quick flash & if I wanted to throw something away.. ........................I would throw ur rhymes in the trash nice closer.. was an ok verse... punches kinda inconsistant....but some hit pretty well. structure was aight..not a bad verse. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ IP: Skriptz, I'd tell you to reach my level, but you can't open the door. So I'll open it for you, & drive you through it and put a new look on the board! doesnt really make sense. This geek'll weep, when he see's I've just dropped better.. Than him.. Because the way I shred Skriptz, I'm reffered to as a angry director! nice bar.. You want to see lyrical accelaration, so Skriptz awaits his fate. But I don't measure my speed, cuz' I'll beat you at any rate. more self glorification, not a diss We all anticipate your drops, but we know it's wack as shit. So I'll kill two bird's with one stone, & throw his verse back @ him. meh... Skriptz a commercial fool, busts the bling bling tryna be cool.. But the only decent video you'd make, is of you flossing my family jewels! dont get it ok, you had one nice bar that hit hard, other punches were...blah and self glorification. not a bad verse either, but i ma give it skriptz for harder hittin punches. NO hate... Return the vote in sig... |
uppin this shit
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God, people really don't get wordplay. & Skriptz you had one decent punch which was your opener...But w/e this site is wack. Upping.
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& ur "scripts" line was played...dont know why people use it...its wack
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uppin this shit
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uppin this shit
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Voted For: Skriptz
ight imma break it down.... skriptz: Coming w/ punches.. but we both know their not gonna hit How can your rhymes end.. when there’s nothing to begin with ^^ good opener decent punch 7/10 Leaving this kid hurt.. so when u walk.. u’ll be limpin & ur bout to get killed.. now Hack dot.. aint worth flippin ight i spose... 5/10 Even though I know ur wack.. ur verses are the same Never felt ya punches.. like went out & bought Novocain good punch 6/10 Stop being a faggot.. ur ego shows me that ur full of urself Cuz Rv read your punches.. & put them back on the book-shelf ^^ had potential to be better 5/10 Lets get this over with.. bout to beat u in a quick flash & if I wanted to throw something away.. ........................I would throw ur rhymes in the trash ^^ lol ok closure kinda weak 5/10 28/50... fairly dissapointing drop from you i have seen better... u had the punches there but they couldav been harder just stay consistant through your battles u dnt wanna beat your opponent u want to whore your opponent was good though structure was good didnt see no perosnals though Hack dot: Skriptz, I'd tell you to reach my level, but you can't open the door. So I'll open it for you, & drive you through it and put a new look on the board! ^^ good opener good punch 7/10 This geek'll weep, when he see's I've just dropped better.. Than him.. Because the way I shred Skriptz, I'm reffered to as a angry director! ^^ didnt rhyme 3/10 You want to see lyrical accelaration, so Skriptz awaits his fate. But I don't measure my speed, cuz' I'll beat you at any rate. nicee kindaplayed though 5/10 We all anticipate your drops, but we know it's wack as shit. So I'll kill two bird's with one stone, & throw his verse back @ him. good 6/10 Skriptz a commercial fool, busts the bling bling tryna be cool.. But the only decent video you'd make, is of you flossing my family jewels! ^^ not bad couldav been worded better though... 6/10 27/50... not a bad verse u couldav got this if u tried harder u had some decent punches in ther but u fell off near the end... other than that your verse was good.. structure and flow was good still no personals though.. v/ skriptz he had better more consistant punches better structure and a more fuller harder hitting verse... good battle though pz n no hate... |
Voted For: Skriptz
I think that Skriptz got this battle because i feel that Skriptz came stronger in the following categories...Punches i felt Skriptz got it was effective and was on point Hack dot you should of been a bit more creative on this occasion personals i felt went to Skriptz good lookin wordplay and creativity goes to Skriptz and flow and structure i'll give to Skriptz. V/Skriptz RTF In My Sig 3 days or vote removed |
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