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the omen 05-22-05 04:22 PM

toxic freeverse
 
i recently got sum news from a manager taht peeped my work that i have potential to be signed with this label that has some wonderfull talent on its roster, this exited me! lol so im goin full throttle from now on, this track i just threw together real quick i dont expect to get great feedback on it as i did not put much effort into it but i assure u i will be attempting my best from my next drop n out from there. wish me luck! :thumbup:

toxic free

the omen 05-22-05 04:41 PM

links btw

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=190717
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191522

Acuity 05-22-05 04:46 PM

i dun been waitin 4 ur next track where u been fooooo? lol

typin as imlistening:

nas sample is nice....piano is buldin up...u come in HARD damn.....at is sick...less of ur usual punchline flow, more lyrical n jus rhyming in this......beat is dope that cello or wateva it is, is str8 killin it...damn this is short, i thought ma PC was fuckin up...y so short man..:cussing: the way u drop in is dopeness.....ur sick man str8 sick....:thumbup: LONGA plz next time

the omen 05-22-05 04:59 PM

lol ^ a big w00t goes out to acuity for tha support, i def am tryin to change up my style, so the reason i havent been droppin in a minute is simple, i actualy have been recording 16 bars a day but i have become quite hard on myself lately i wont drop n e thing n e more, i just am not feelin it cuz now i have potential i have to live up to, this label is sick, im waaaaay below the level of the artists on it rite now so im tryin to elevate with quickness, glad u were feelin this, ima drop another on monday that im hoping will kill it tho...

Lethal GK 05-22-05 07:45 PM

a yo this is aight, you fell off in some places like towards the end, quality is pretty good but you need to learn how to stay on beat all the way threw cause you fall off and then jump back on

Key... 05-22-05 10:45 PM

No special thanks to yo producer

*leaves...lol*

the omen 05-23-05 10:41 AM

^ lol u kno what, i was ferreal makin a note to put (mixed by dv) but musta slipped my mind lol.


MIXED BY DV PEOPLE!!!!!

Know-Gimix 05-23-05 01:47 PM

that shit was pretty hot, lyrically throughout until the last 5-10 seconds, the multies just died, but, it was a nice drop none the less, real fitness w/ the words, somethin about it though, I dunno if it was quality, or mic or your voice, but it wasn't crisp enough, it didn't stand out from the track enough. I dunno, but it was nice, keep droppin. 1

the omen 05-23-05 06:10 PM

hmm, ^ i think the last 5-10 seconds of it were my favorite. but oh well :)

[.:D:.] 05-23-05 08:15 PM

i told dat fool lemme mix it..but u dont listen...

the omen 05-23-05 09:02 PM

lol d i used ur technique n everything... wait no i didnt thats rite i let dv mix it lol ill throw it to u next time n see wuts good


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