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be real why u aint wanna be you???
chorus.....
i dont give a fuck if you like me,i aint doin this for you...... i rap cause i love it, but u should step foot in my shoes..... it aint eazy i dont get allowence from my mom no more...... so stop actin like yall r hard,if u got food u aint poor.... verse 1 why do people wanna be hood?doesnt that mean you struggle.... live life tha hard knock way,gotta try to break free from tha rubble.... i admit yes sum of yall r real,but half of u claimin shit is 0% "ghetto"...... how u gonna say u a ghetto child?when ya momz got 200$ stillettoz... i dont feel that and i never said i was a thug,but i do struggle like nelly..... shit sometimes i gotta be jackin shit,to put food in my fukkin belly.... now how is that fun times,while u sittin with family eatin dinner..... then sleep in a warm bed ,aint gotta worry bout tha upcomin winter..... chorus..... i dont give a fuck if you like me,i aint doin this for you...... i rap cause i love it, but u should step foot in my shoes..... it aint eazy i dont get allowence from my mom no more...... so stop actin like yall r hard,if u got food u aint poor.... verse 2...... so you just found a new rap site,so now your gonna go beef...... i hate how these people act,u gonna smash out my E-teeth?.... if yall wanna be ghetto leave ya momz warm crib and hit tha street..... leave home all your nice clothes,and sleep at night with a wet sheet..... so now that your freezin i bet u dont think its that much fun..... all your eyes see is gettin stoned bein drunk,and firin off gunz...... but theres an actual struggle that comes with those thingz..... bring food home to there kidz,they dont only rock diamond ringz..... chorus..... i dont give a fuck if you like me,i aint doin this for you...... i rap cause i love it, but u should step foot in my shoes..... it aint eazy i dont get allowence from my mom no more...... so stop actin like yall r hard,if u got food u aint poor.... verse 3...... i just wanted to expose net thugz,leavin this ryme as a scar...... if you can spit rymes good then why frontin,just be who u are..... i got no problems with beef here,but in life come see me we talk..... ill fukkin punch your ass out,see i didnt say youll be layin in chalk..... but hey mabe if ya really erked me,than that shit might just happin..... come on net thugz start spittin rymes,instead of internet yappin..... but anyway ive done enough to tarnesh you fukkerz computer ego..... aha but i know this shit wont werk but my replys will be funny though..... chorus..... i dont give a fuck if you like me,i aint doin this for you...... i rap cause i love it, but u should step foot in my shoes..... it aint eazy i dont get allowence from my mom no more...... so stop actin like yall r hard,if u got food u aint poor.... just something i ripped up cause i aint been droppin much exept battles A LIVIN LEGENDZ PRODUCTION (COPYRIGHT) :thefinger |
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Uppin To Tha Top.............................................
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can i get sum replys ahahah no ones postin cause there all ashamed now j/p com on people ...........
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yo....lol alot of the shit mentioned here is true...lots of hood wannabes..lol notice why i changed my name i aint frontin, i never been since i first started wit rapverse but i just never changed my name till recently....just a lil public service announcement before i get inta talkin bout the open mic....anywayz honesty truth and feeling was put inta this shit so i like that...vocab was aight coulda been better...perfect structure....and most of it went together nicely some were a lil played out but that aight.....7.5/10...keep it up...u should do this on audio.. i think it'll work great for that dawg...peace
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this is a dope song
8/10 but only thing i see worng in here is you got 4 bar verses Fav line but hey mabe if ya really erked me,than that shit might just happin..... come on net thugz start spittin rymes,instead of internet yappin..... nice song.................................. |
Pretty descent. Word to gettin your point across. I liked how you made this a complete song, and finished it. Your lyrics were dope as usual. I was feeling tha overall flow of it. Tha chorus was kinda cheesy to me, but other than that, I felt this was a pretty nice drop. Kinda disappointed this aint got more feed, but fuck these people. This shit was nice. Somtimes I feel tha same way, but you just gota shake it off and keep doin what you do. But this shit was nice like I said. Tightest shit I seen up in here in a while, and that's real. 9/10...because of tha chorus I wasnt feeling. Keep holdin it down.
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nice drop.....i was feelin dat yo....str8 real......
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yeah i felt this right herwe for rea good song may have to change a few word for audion other than that a good song just too many internet thugs for for real (LOL)
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thanx feer tha feed yall i will return tha favour if ya leave feed and a link to an open mic bump to tha top for tha last time today........................................
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This was a pretty decent drop... it was well rounded..
Probably one of the best verses ive read from casper.. Your lyrics were good they were on point.. made your song really good.. Structure was decent , Flow was on point.. Chorus to me was wack , im not feelin it thought it could have been better.. Overall nice job keep it up elevate on wordplay and vocab usuage.. |
Bump..............................................
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that was pretty nice...like most of your verses, but this one was one of the best ive read. and one of the best on the site i've read.
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ye this is fukin dope............OM of the month ere!!!!
It would be nice as a song!!!! |
yeah casper nice peep this (http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192025
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