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DQ 05-23-05 03:46 PM

~Babylon~ vs. MoTiF
 
Battles up Monday - Check In by Wednesday - Drop by Friday - Votes by Sunday

No line limit and the battler with most votes by Sunday night is the winner. If this is a topical battle, write a topical and not a poetic drop and the same is vice a versa.

All Battlers must vote on 4 other battles and leave their voting links in their battle thread. Battles voted on may be from either poetry or topical battles.

Extensions must be asked for by Thursday night by pming any of the mods (Acuity, Drama Queen & Elementality). No extensions will be given 4 if asked 4 on Friday night. Extensions are only given till Sunday night at the most.

Every battler must nominate (not their own) one topical and poetry battle for pieces of the week, in the main forum . People with pieces of the week shall have their drops stickied and placed in the Pieces Of Inspiration sub forum


Topic: Distorted Reflection

~Babylon~ 05-23-05 04:15 PM

check.....................I cant beileve I lost already....gotta step up this week

MoTiF 05-23-05 04:58 PM

Check...im not saying im gonna win but....ima come super dope cause i like this topic.

~Babylon~ 05-28-05 12:02 AM

"Distorted Reflection"
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staring in a mirror, my eyes filled with deception and false truths
like a flawed noose, my neck tightens before release, raw abuse
emaculent versions of lies, hide behind the shadowed dephs of my eyes
a spiritual rise form this wrong and misconstrued events of demise
I'm blinded by the glare from the mirrors truth telling reflections
A rare appearance of a clear roose to hide all of hells conceptions
I feal a blessing, but can't recognize the presence of helpful spirits
hidden in whispers of angels, came gods warning but I failed to hear it
now trapped in this cage of prysim colors, which sheild the smiles of evil
a mild retreival, of my life from the clutches of a haterd so wild but feeble
I feal my face to find my self, but still cant sense my own presence
alone is this message, to give god my heart and soul as a present
a rewarding lesson, but still I turn my head without means of notice
punished to not expose emotion, but I have been redeemed to show it
without knowing it, I've shown my self, by mirror, a twisted man inside
pissed & damned to lie, anger flows to the top, kiss my plans good bye
cuz from this point on, I'm lost trapped amungst these words of confusion
with this wrongful path I'm choosen, distored is this view a curved illusion
now at a stare down with a curupted spirit but now appears to be me
and its clear to see, that the fear, hate, an adjustices stands here near me
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~BABZ~

MoTiF 05-28-05 10:31 PM

Shit unless youll let me drop then i now showed you didnt bold friday so i was assumin drop was by sunday =\

~Babylon~ 05-29-05 02:52 AM

well if u only drop 20 lines like mine I dont care......................

DQ 05-29-05 04:16 AM

Sunday is okay, your opponent agreed as well so it's no problem...

Dervla 05-29-05 09:50 AM

I love DQ SHE'S THE BEST MOD running a tournement..........................Woot.

Mentalz 05-29-05 03:01 PM

I await to reap the intellectual crop this thread yeilds today at 11:59pm. Good Luck Chryme.

MoTiF 05-29-05 08:03 PM

Just give him win im to lazy to write for this site anymore =\

Sean Gunner 05-30-05 10:44 AM

v- Babz

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DQ 05-30-05 12:34 PM

Closed due to opponent no-showing


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