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DQ 05-23-05 03:49 PM

Drakel vs (Jimmy Pocketz)
 
Battles up Monday - Check In by Wednesday - Drop by Friday - Votes by Sunday

No line limit and the battler with most votes by Sunday night is the winner. If this is a topical battle, write a topical and not a poetic drop and the same is vice a versa.

All Battlers must vote on 4 other battles and leave their voting links in their battle thread. Battles voted on may be from either poetry or topical battles.

Extensions must be asked for by Thursday night by pming any of the mods (Acuity, Drama Queen & Elementality). No extensions will be given 4 if asked 4 on Friday night. Extensions are only given till Sunday night at the most.

Every battler must nominate (not their own) one topical and poetry battle for pieces of the week, in the main forum . People with pieces of the week shall have their drops stickied and placed in the Pieces Of Inspiration sub forum


Topic: The Melting Pot

Germ 05-23-05 05:30 PM

hmmm...topics getting better...lol

gl jimmy :thumbup:

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~Luciano~ 05-24-05 01:07 AM

check mate............

Germ 05-26-05 11:27 PM

can i get an extension till saturday for this?

really appreciate it :)

DQ 05-27-05 11:33 AM

Yeh, no problemo...

Germ 05-28-05 03:42 AM

might need till sunday around 12 noon, MAYBE, sorry thought for this, just been superly busy with other crap and just been away from comp......i refuse to no-show though, so i will write something

DQ 05-28-05 06:07 AM

It's okay as long as you make sure you drop...

Germ 05-29-05 01:21 PM

aight, a little late from what i said, but i got in late last night and whipped something up, kinda a love song, but whatever, its all i could think about. so hope you enjoy it.

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Melting Pot

living a life, full of strife and always alone
dreaming of a wife cause i grown to this point on my own
love never known, feelings inside to anyone never shone
woulda flown out long ago, but nobody has a pair of wings to loan
crying myself to sleep, my existence meaningless and cheap
no soul to keep, my esssence doesn't journey that deep
so i continue to weep, im on the edge but i cease to leap
cause i still have hope for that one person who sweeps me off my feet
who will carry me away from today, and land in the heart of tomorrow
memories wont lead me astray, they set me apart from sorrow
where i'll never have to borrow, i could sway, be gray, always gloom
but the sight of you, like perfume...overwhelms my wounds cause with you....
...............................................lov e stays in bloom

doesn't matter where i am, or where you are
could be miles apart or sitting in your car
i got love for you, dont need a second thought
never cool down,...cause you're my melting pot

i remember it clear, thinking back it happened last year
cherished moments talking with you, easily make past with fears
every word you spoke cheer, bringing sensation to my ears
touching my heart deep, but this time it was joy in my tears
you were unique and rare, elegant, you did things without a care
and your beauty always seem to leave me stuck in a stare
your soft, flowing hair, divine pair of eyes, seem to leave me at a loss for air
and i knew with just one look, that nobody else could compare
you're all i ever sought, i know with you, love isn't bought
its real, and you make me feel the little i have, is actually alot
you're what i want, you complete my life, you tie all the knots
everything you do is hot, and im caught in it all...so never cool down
....................................cause you're my melthing pot

doesn't matter where i am, or where you are
could be miles apart or sitting in your car
i got love for you, dont need a second thought
never cool down,...cause you're my melting pot

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Sean Gunner 05-30-05 10:54 AM

v- Kesse

Showing.

Germ 05-30-05 11:30 AM

no feed :(.....

Elementality 05-31-05 05:51 PM

Kesse wins .


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