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DQ 05-23-05 04:00 PM

Tremendous vs. H-N-I-C
 
Battles up Monday - Check In by Wednesday - Drop by Friday - Votes by Sunday

No line limit and the battler with most votes by Sunday night is the winner. If this is a topical battle, write a topical and not a poetic drop and the same is vice a versa.

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Topic: Eye for an eye

Tremendous 05-24-05 04:35 PM

Ima recycle an old verse for this..next time when I no-show it means Im not apart of this league....but Im show this week

H-N-I-C 05-25-05 12:09 AM

Checkin In...............

H-N-I-C 05-25-05 09:26 PM

Had to drop kinda early...won't see a computer for a few days




Crime Scene
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Monday 72 on a warm June summer's night
A fight insued between a neighbor's man and his wife
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Wrong place wrong time found at the scene of a crime
Puzzled look on his face standin next to a nine
Cups cuffin, perp cussin, body laid out wit blood gushin
Back up sped onto tha scene, it was evident they were rushin
We had a rape/homicide and tha suspect was goin down
Cuz there was plenty of evidence on tha crime scene to be found
Semi-automatic nine milli was tha killer's weapon of choice
Bruises found on tha victim's throat...clearly he ruined her voice
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Down at tha precient for questioning
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In detainment he said..."I heard muffled cries from a far"
"Thought I was trippin cuz I jus had a few drinks at tha bar"
"But I heard tha cries again so I wandered next door"
"Saw a man runnin away and a dead body on tha floor"
"Next thing I know u guys are here and I'm bein restrained in cuffs"
Millions of questions cloud my mind but #1 is How Tha Fuck
Did this happen...will they make me go to trial next?
Sad thing...innocent man arrested and sentenced to death
25 years on death row...gave him no less time cuz he behaved
Electrocuted, a month later paper read..."Innocent man sent to tha grave"
Enhanced forensic science found a flaw in tha case
Details escaped...didn't catch multiple blood splats on tha victim's face
They found tha real killer cuz scientists picked up tha slack
Yet a man was dead remained tha fact and he wasn't comin back
An eye for an eye tha government thought that was justice
Human error isn't rare and tha fact remains just this
God created human beings...We got no right to kill a guy
So we need to do awy with sayings like "An Eye for an Eye"

Elementality 05-31-05 05:44 PM

HNIC Wins By No Show .


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