Skriptz vs KhAoZ ThEoRy
 

Battle Rules:

10 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-26-05 at 06:38 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

KhAoZ ThEoRy has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-23-05 06:39 PM.

Skriptz has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-23-05 06:48 PM.

i'll stomp your face on the ground - so you'll be feeling like dirt
plus u getting smacked w/ a globe - so u just left in a world of hurt
u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep
& ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat
There's only one word to describe you - and that word is Gay
Cuz once Khaoz entered the battle - he tripped over the doorway
Please kid just give it up - cuz in this battle - I'm a stalker
But once Khaoz took me to school - I pushed his ass in the locker
I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself
& you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself

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Thought U Wuz Gonna Be A Challenge, So I Had 2 Accept
U Callin Out Newbies? Cuz Ya Flowz Sunk Now Ya Ship Wrecked
HeavyWeight Champ? Bitch Aint Rocky, Or Even A ''Contender''
EZ Win? Nup, Fake MC Culdnt ''Pull Da Stringz'' If I Handed Him A Fender
Bend-Ya Barz, Cuz They Aint Straight, Like Yo Persona
Ur Copyrighted By Khaos, Bcuz U Know I Just Owned-Ya
Now I'll Disown-Ya, Put U Up For Adoption, Losingz Ya Only Option
I Heard Yo Name Wuz ''Cherry-Red'' Cuz Da ''Pussy'' Stays ''Poppin''
Flowz Is Played Out, Pleaze Dont ''Bust-a-Rhyme'' Just ''Stay-Out''
Yo Verses Aint Goin 2 Plan, Lyke U Just Lost The ''Lay-Out'' :thumbup:

Fender = A Model Of A Guitar

Letz Get Sum Voters On Diz Hot Battle Cha'll, We Will Return Da Vote

This was feedback posted for KhAoZ ThEoRy
 

viewin poles... nice battle boys............................

Hey Can We Get Sum Voterz On Diz Battle Peoplez???

uppin this shit

Yo, Holla At Diz Battle Rite Here...Diz Iz Fiyah Fo Yall

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vote on this shit.. seriously

Voted For: Skriptz

Aight I'm Lazy...So I'ma Jus Do It Real Simple...Dont Take Da Vote Away...It'll Still Be Explained...

PUNCHES: Skriptz...Both Used Em, His Were More Effective
PERSONALS: Skriptz...Khaoz Really Didnt Have 2 Many...
CREATIVITY Khaoz...Khoaz Verse Had More Thought...Lines Were More Clever
FLOW/STRUCTURE: Skriptz...Just Take A Look At Da Verse...Both Went Off At Points But Khaoz Was More A Lil More Off
WORDPLAY: Both...Both Niggas Used Wordplay In Da Same Way, No One Stood Out In Dis Category

OPENER: Khaoz
MIDDLE: Skriptz
CLOSER: Skriptz

"I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself
& you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself"

OVERALL VOTE: Skriptz

Tight Battle...RTF...$cream At Me

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

uppin this shit

Voted For: Skriptz


Thought U Wuz Gonna Be A Challenge, So I Had 2 Accept
U Callin Out Newbies? Cuz Ya Flowz Sunk Now Ya Ship Wrecked
Eh ok 6/10
HeavyWeight Champ? Bitch Aint Rocky, Or Even A ''Contender''
EZ Win? Nup, Fake MC Culdnt ''Pull Da Stringz'' If I Handed Him A Fender
Good attemp of a punch line but didn’t hit hard 6/10
Bend-Ya Barz, Cuz They Aint Straight, Like Yo Persona
Ur Copyrighted By Khaos, Bcuz U Know I Just Owned-Ya
Wack 3/10
Now I'll Disown-Ya, Put U Up For Adoption, Losingz Ya Only Option
I Heard Yo Name Wuz ''Cherry-Red'' Cuz Da ''Pussy'' Stays ''Poppin''
Iight good 7/10
Flowz Is Played Out, Pleaze Dont ''Bust-a-Rhyme'' Just ''Stay-Out''
Yo Verses Aint Goin 2 Plan, Lyke U Just Lost The ''Lay-Out''
Eh 6/10

Overall: 28/50


i'll stomp your face on the ground - so you'll be feeling like dirt
plus u getting smacked w/ a globe - so u just left in a world of hurt
Good punch line and openor 8/10
u got no "welcome to rv" post - but Rv must of been asleep
& ur loss to me is like King of the Hill - just another damn repeat
Nice 7/10
There's only one word to describe you - and that word is Gay
Cuz once Khaoz entered the battle - he tripped over the doorway
Eh okay 6/10
Please kid just give it up - cuz in this battle - I'm a stalker
But once Khaoz took me to school - I pushed his ass in the locker
Eh 5/10
I'll knock you off you feet - so you can't even stand up for yourself
& you can change your name - but your still stuck w/ yourself
Iight good closer 6/10

Overall: 32/50

v/ skript for just a better verse

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