AckRite vs Bernonedown
 

Battle Rules:

8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Jea...G'Luck Dunn

Minimum posts to vote: 100

Check in by: 05-23-05 at 07:21 PM

Must drop verse in 40 minutes after check in.

AckRite has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-23-05 06:53 PM.

Bernonedown has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-23-05 06:56 PM.

T-money spits better shit and you cant outwit my english literature, too many words, your insecured, your lyrics are never heard or undrestood by my boys in the hood, we think your shit sucks, your outta luck, dont wanna fuck or start shit with me, a bitch always on his knees, doesnt take shame in his name but he needs to be tamed cause his lyrics are lame and cant compete in the rap game, or let his heart feel pain, but he does realize that he cant comprimise that T-money never shy's away, from any battle, especially one this easy to win, now what u gonna ask your DJ to spin?

VOTE UP............WDF Was You Spittin Bernonedown Lol

This was feedback posted for Bernonedown
 

Yeah, AckRite owned you easily...

Like woah....

Voted For: AckRite

ACKRITE TAKES THIS FOR ME, FOR STARTERS I COULD READ HIS VERSE AND WAS ABLE TO TAKE A BREATH.... WASNT FEELIN YOUR STRUCTURE AT ALL BERN...

ALTHOUGH THERE WERE A COUPLE OF PUNCHIS HIDDED IN THEM WORDS THEY STILL WERNT UP TO ACKS STANDARD, HES LOOKIN GOOD AND ELEVATING.

ACK GETS THIS DUE TO BETTER PUNCHES AND PERSONALS AND ME BIENG ABLE TO READ IT.

NO HATE, RTF IN SIG.....I DONT WANNA HAVE MY VOTE DQED :THUMBUP:

Jea I Hope They Dont Take It Away..........Shit'll Take Even Longer 2 End...........UPPIN'

i explained it, plz rtf... .

Voted For: AckRite

Voted For: AckRite

GOOD:

Flow - ackrite
Structure - ackrite
Punchlines - ackrite
vocab - ackrite
Wordplay - ackrite
Nameplay - ackrite

BAD:

forced Rhymes - none
Forced Multis - none
Non Sence - none

CREATIVITY

Theme Battle - none
Creative Punches - ackrite
creative multi's - ackrite

PERSONALS:
"...Got A Short Time illness...Sick In Da Head...Dis Brain Froze Psycho...
...Knows That His Mind Is Garbage.....No Wonder He Always Recycle!..."

OPENING/CLOSING:

Opening: none
Closing: bernonedown

COMMENT:
Your structure and flow was fucked up Bern, preschool vocab, ain't haitin but if you fix that structure you'll improve ur shit, try to have better punches....

V/ akrite

RTF!!!!!

Jea Imma Return ALLLLLL Da Favors Dont Worry About It....I'm Lazy But I'll Check Ya Battles

UPPIN'

ight good lookin..................................

Voted For: AckRite

...Hide Ya Face In Shame Cuz, Readin Ya Lines Everyone Say Huh?...
...Bern....Cuttin Ya Chin Wit Ya Daughter Dont Mean U 'RAISED-HER'... (razor)
...Blaze Trees...He Smokey Da Bear!, Sutter Ali...Keep Shakin In Fear...
...Suicidal?!?...Must Have 'SHOT HEARIN'...He Got Da Gun 2 His Ear!...
...Got A Short Time illness...Sick In Da Head...Dis Brain Froze Psycho...
...Knows That His Mind Is Garbage.....No Wonder He Always Recycle!...
...Hooker Ya Sold Bars Aint A Threat....Unborn....U Not Harmin Me Yet!...
...I'm Holdin NIKES, So If I Cut Ya Lip...Ya Blood'll Flow Out In CHECK...

Dat ^ Vs..

T-money spits better shit and you cant outwit my english literature, too many words, your insecured, your lyrics are never heard or undrestood by my boys in the hood, we think your shit sucks, your outta luck, dont wanna fuck or start shit with me, a bitch always on his knees, doesnt take shame in his name but he needs to be tamed cause his lyrics are lame and cant compete in the rap game, or let his heart feel pain, but he does realize that he cant comprimise that T-money never shy's away, from any battle, especially one this easy to win, now what u gonna ask your DJ to spin?

What Mo Can I Say? Vote/Ackrite, Fo Actually Dropping A Verse

Plz Return Da Vote In Mah Signature Ackrite