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Ca$per vs Bonecollector
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8-12 lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting etc Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 05-23-05 at 11:07 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
CA$per has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-23-05 10:38 PM.
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It’s a shame this kid just keepz on thinking hes dope……….
He only wins battles cause of tha dick riderz votes…… your lines r played like hockey,not to mention OFFSIDE…… u fell asleep on tha keyboard,then this verse was derived.... imma swell yo lipz with this line, if that’s even possible... u cant even see tha screen ,your lipz r a fukkin obstacle.... yo wheres your usual one punch,i think i musta missed it...... cause on x mas and yo birthday is tha only time u gifted.... Its funny against me how I know u pre writen tha shit……. If you were a famous boxer u still couldn’t make one hit….. im let this kid rest now,this was menatlly exausting no doubt... flap yo lipz so much they huge,its like an oral workout...... |
Bonecollector has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-23-05 10:48 PM.
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Its done Bones Known to "Roll Factors".. "Disfold actors" Cause i'll Palm ya Heart and Box your Shadow!!
"Bones a body snatcher".....so "bones" will put Ca$per to dreams Like me being His "Soul Catcher" Diagnosis put facts Down!! Uh Huh "He's Thru" Crip Huh? so i guess You'll "Bleed Blue"? ....................But How are you suppose to show Skills!! Ca$per if NoOne Can "See-U" I can Spit Gangsta To!! So watch how da "Snub SHouts" Cus ill put them "Day In An Day Out" frown on his face and look how this "Thug Pouts" Crip cus? Lmao dude was Part of a national "Club Scout" Bonecollector's Known to "Speak raw" Crack ya Mouf den i'll "Tweak Jawz" Cus i need no Cause ill just put an End to Ghosts Like Graves and a "Deep-falls" You dont come close to my ranks , so like the first thanksgiven you better give thanks ..........Cus im letting you live,But how the fuck did you lose to .......Carlton Banks!? So im sorry the friendly ghost it about to be Terminated..and gone for good(s) You aint no "Gang"Star", cus you will never come to my neck of the woods* |
Diagnosis is my new name!..getting a name change!
Sorry about my fucked structure damn! |
This was feedback posted for Bonecollector
Man your structure is fucked...no offense...just checkin this battle out...
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^yeah i know damn i didnt mean to make it come out that way
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Voted For: Bonecollector
Punches-Bone...none was really hard hitten,but i can see the potential in ya verse...5/10 Multis-Bone...u got this on lock thru the whole verse...try addin some hard punches to the multis then u good ta go in future battles....7/10 Vocab-Tie...pretty much basic on both parts...i really dont care bout this category much..but try expandin it a lil more Personals-Ca$...nothin ta really say on this,but Ca$ add more punches ta ya personals...Bone add more personals Strucuture-Ca$ Opener-Tie...both of yall came off weak on this category Closer-Ca$...ok closer,liked how u added it wit the personal V/Bone due to more punches and nicely done wordplay RTF links in sig!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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Voted For: Bonecollector
DAMN Diz Wuz A Fiyah Battle Frum Diagnosis, Hiz Verse Wuz Fuckin Sick, Da Wordplay Culdnt Have Been Better, Da Flow Wuz Rite On Point, Dat Cub Scout Line Wuz Fuckin Nice Rite There Mayn, Propps Fo Dat, Yo Personals Killed CA$per Casper U Had Sum Okay Stuff, But Fo Real, I Bet Even U Admit Diagnosis Beat U,. No Shame Dawg, Look At Hiz Verse, Itz Fiyah Plz Return Da Vote In Mah Signature Or I'll Contact Da Adminstrator And Have Mah Shit Removed |
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Voted For: CA$per
Damn, That shit was hot by casper, It all want together good, Bones-8/10 Casper-9/10 |
This was feedback posted for Bonecollector
....wow...now ur verse is lookin like Kin*Ethnic
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This was feedback posted for CA$per
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAAHAHAHAH NICE@Ca$per!I Would Vote but NO CREW VOTES!Nice verse @ Diagnosis!
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