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~Luciano~ 05-24-05 01:38 AM

Love Letter
 

To Whom it May Concern.....

It seems its been forever since we last touched
years and months since "I love u"Meant so much
Been forever since i smelled your Sweet Fragerence
U Drove Me Into Sexual Indevers Skipping Patience
And Struggling to find the Time 2 Mentally Ballence
My Actions from seeing u Cry then back 2 Laughin
And Passout From Lovemakeing to Arise Confused
and I say i'll Never Forget so please Come Proove
That these Passions and Intensions are Honest
Towards me Secureing your Heart 4ever i Promise
That i will Never Let another Tear Drip from You
Pussy Isnt a Factor..Love is what i want 4rm U
So Please Explain Lord..Love..How can i 4get Her
Only Can Take Steps Forward with this Luv Letter.

Sincerely,,

James

~Luciano~ 05-24-05 01:12 PM

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Macca 05-24-05 06:42 PM

nice. If I was older I would write shit like this. lol. Very nice flow. I just liked the whole thing cuz it was about love. Good job ....

~Luciano~ 05-24-05 06:43 PM

thanx cuz......

fluidmoon 05-24-05 07:28 PM

nice love letter man, nothing really to say except your spelling is off again, but it was sweet and to the point, you should give this to the girl..lol, anyway keep dropping..1

~Luciano~ 05-24-05 07:39 PM

thanks...........

H-N-I-C 05-25-05 12:41 AM

Well, this was nice...I feel pices like this, cuz I normally write stuff like this all tha time...nice flow, good concept and just an overall nice piece.

Overall...9/10

~Luciano~ 05-28-05 07:17 PM

4 sho thanks ........


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