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Valiant 05-24-05 04:32 PM

SomethinG QuiCk
 
Who are we? All of us, corrupting shit, breeching trust/
look at it, I had enough, cop's killing kids, out of luck/
It's something quick, It's nothing shit, like Ricky Slick(Slick Rick), In 80s flicks/
It maybe quick, but' its crazy sick, like crazy chicks, in a mercerdez pitt (cockpit)/
My lyrics are complicated, like mute kids with braces, so I illustrate it, with fluid patients/
I'm one of a kind, gun toking a nine, 1 hour before time, 10s your hour of shine/
I'm talking about death, you don't shine in respect, you wine out of breath, with 8 lines scarred in your chest/
I'm the sergeant, bitch, not a virus glitch, like a wired snitch, on a high sound pitch (the cops listening)/
That was quick and bold, with 8 stories told, they ain't story jokes, 1 line left to say, that's all folks/

FeeD BaCk!

Valiant 05-24-05 04:50 PM

come On I need feedback for this

Murdah.txt 05-24-05 06:18 PM

ight this was a good drop good vocab good concept and overall a good drop fix yo structure only thing i aint liking word return tha favour on one of my linkz

Kawn Flixx 05-24-05 07:04 PM

I need a link! ..or this will be closed


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