The Light Of Dreams....(DEEP)
 

Removed - Plagiarized Poem

*will edit links in later*

Pretty nice drop...rhyme scheme was good, and tha topic was cool. Tha title was tru, it was pretty deep.

Overall...8/10

RTF on one of tha links in my sig

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Good poem man, i liked the concept, you stayed on point throughout, vocabulary was perfect for this piece, you definatley have a way with words,keep dropping.1

real nice drop....loved the rhyme scheme you used and the way one line flawlessly flowed into the next, nice vocab and nice imagery, a real original piece.......keep dropping

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