New Song HIGH LIFE Hot shit
 

yeah its pretty good....check it out.....give me some good feed and i'll get u with some feed

www.soundclick.com/jayjking

Its The "High Life" song


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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=191525
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http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192310

Tight...........
good song.... liked it a lot. u got de skill

RTF

ROFL...u said u was leavin..heh

ill leave feed anyway...

flow has improved since the last time u been here...vocals are a lil loud to me...
chorus..ehhh coulda been ALOT betta...
lrically the song was pretty meh...and that joint at the end..nah dont say that..."all the kids that like to buy drugs"

that sounds stupid..forced and its not even lyrics

suprized u remembed who i was lol.....shit i quit my label..they were tryin to fuck me over and steal my songs..and like i said i'm tryin to be a commercial artist

aight i'mma peep u out right now..but shit uppin this

u sent me this shit the other day....pretty tight track fam...u sound black to me...i dont know if it's just me that thinks that but i know ya white...keep droppin em fam

suprized u remembed who i was lol.....shit i quit my label..they were tryin to fuck me over and steal my songs..and like i said i'm tryin to be a commercial artist

lol

aight peepin... i like this beat... the chorus is on point, kinda basic but its coo... ya got on beat just fine... ya lyrics are really basic, i am more into the effort put behind lyrical content, this shyt is kinda weak lyrically, stubbles tha bunny? who tha fuck is that? this sounds like u wanna b 50 cent too much, i mean u got a good voice but i hate what u rappin about, stop talkin bout ur hard in tha streets, i hate wen ppl rap about this shyt, if u hard u wouldnt have to say it, ppl would just know feel me? well u do have a good voice n are on beat, lol like d said, cut out that last adlib. over all this shyt was not my typa music but keep droppin i kno alot of ppl like this kinda garbage music, not sayin ur garbage, just saying that this is the genre of music that the industry feeds off of, it should change if u ask me.. but good luck

yeah word thats the kinda music i like and i wanna be in....commercial songs

Beat is nice..I love that Snoop Dogg song..

Flow is nice...but somtimes you strayed off the topic about smokin....dleivery is nice

Verse are ok...and hook is catchy

shit was aight..i was diggin some of it and i just wasnt feelin the rest of it.........the quality is ok....i heard better on here but ur quality is still aight...but i cant complain too much bout that cuz my mic is bout the same quality....ur rappin style is not really a style i care for but it was aight....ur vocab was waaaay too basic...need ta get off rappin one syllable words...otherwise this was aight..nuthin wack ta where i cant listen to it....i'd give it a 6.5/10....yo i was bein as honest as i can get so go return the fav and leave ur honest openion...http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193287
i just DJ and mix shit so u wont find me on it but still feedback ta be typed

word lmaao at this being infector mindz haha...but gd 2 c u still doin ur thing

eways typin as i listen...beat has a thumping bass...this should be a str8 club track or sumin wid a catchy hook...i like the way the beat comes in off the intro...hook is cool, not really gd enough but nice...lyrically this is pretty decent, ur flow s perfect, but its consistent wid no change ups in multis or w/e,...quality is v/good...lol @ u sayin "tipdrill"...this shit is gettin ma hed goin the more i listen, its pretty nice man...u pretty nice wid it..holla at me 4 a collabo or sumin...

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RTF fam: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193240
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193124

this was pretty hot, i liked the beat n some lyrics, keep doin ya dizzle