New Way
 

Yo my name is Rey I got the mic in my hand im gona drop bombs
like two can san tell me whos the man with the master plan that
holds the universe in the palm of his hands I know living life is rough
especially with out god it's extra tuff im going to stay strap but not
with a gun but with my bible because im gods disciple here to spread
the word my bible is my weapon I don't need no 45 im not here to be
taking lives yea my screen name might be unblessed but i'm going to
put this name to rest I have a new path in mind no longer blind to worldly
order im a free man with only one plan god has shown me that theres
light in darkness theres hope in life no need for this stainless steel knife
don't be fooled buy satan techniques hes like car oil uses you for a while
then he leaks he's just upset becuase he knows that he is sertent to fall
like the news years big ball so in god I trust to remove me from this evil
lust so just keep in mind theres a higher bean the allmighty supreme GOD.

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uppin for some feedback.

Amen man, nice piece, really enjoyed readin it. Keep up the good work and praisin the Lord.

Thanks Christianite.

yeah, this was a nice peice.. good structure... vocab was good just work on ur overall concepts a bit, i liked it.. hope to see more of u..

Thanks man thats good to hear.