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Running Out Of Time
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this is some pretty good shit ma...u should spit more often...i like this...everything really seems on point, ain't nothing i can really get on cause their weren't to many flaws...keep droppin shit like this ma
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word thnx for feed uppin for more critique.
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Beat is... diff, not a fan doe lol
not feeln the voice 100%, but ya flow is on point, delevery could use some work. Lower beat volume a lil, 1 db prob. Lyrics are ight. no chorus? hmm sc just shut down.. couldnt hear 2nd verse from what i heard its ight 6.5/10 |
the chorus was the first thing you heard...and it played after the first verse and after the second..thnx for feedback uppin for more.
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Your quality sucks.....flow is ok..beat is weak to me ma....I could really here the lyrics so i wont judge
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Couldnt* .....coo shit
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*re-posted reply from U.F.*
your flow's better, now all you gotta do is turn ya damn vocals up nigra :)...definetly your flow is way better than when I last heard you so that's a major plus ma...get at me about a good vocal EDITing process I got from Milkman ma...lyrics far as I could actually hear were real though ma, keep doin' it... |
word felt like upping. so i am
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right away i ain't feelin this beat... too computer soundin, really shitty synths...
you got decent flow... quality could be way upp'd.. sound like your vocals are on the left channel really strong to, your addlibs or an echo on the right.. it sounds weird, lyrically i got no problems with the track, work on the delivery at places, you put a lil too much emphasys on the wrong places some time.. ne-way yo, shit's i'ight still... pz. peep "How We Do It..." Ft: IllMental & SinfaC for me... |
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