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Viva 05-26-05 08:37 PM

Bradley_thomas vs b-gurl
 
Battle Rules:

6 - 8 Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-26-05 at 09:07 PM

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System 05-26-05 08:37 PM

bradley_thomas has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-26-05 08:37 PM.

System 05-26-05 08:38 PM

b-gurl has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-26-05 08:38 PM.

bradley_thomas 05-26-05 08:45 PM

ok you gonna regret battling me-- once im done youll see
this girl is probably a drug whore-- every night she hopes to score
she goes to raves to get drunk-- passes out and hits the floor, kerplunk
she wakes up next to her naked mom-- then the night before hit her like a bomb
the next night she does the same, sleeps with ned-- wakes up with her dad in her bed
this girl's fucked up big time-- get some counseling it wont cost you a dime ;)

Viva 05-26-05 08:50 PM

Oh my god, what kinda name is bradley thomas, i can tell already dat u gon be a bore
Fuck i've seen 12 yr old baby mommas but u still 'more of a whore'
Dayum! i jus checked this kids only 13, hes still prepubescent!!
I'm like a bent school teacher cuz im 'fuckin his ass' up but only 2 teach him a lesson!
dont mess wit the best,jus gimme 8 lines and I'm through
I'll make u realise that ur wack n u'll leave rap to sing the blues!
I gotta hand it to him tho, kids brave, i gave him the chance to opt out
but he didnt,acceptin that i was gna beat his ass without a doubt!

bradley_thomas 05-26-05 08:56 PM

hey im 14 im not thirteen i turned fourteen april 10

Viva 05-26-05 08:58 PM

forgive me for that mistake, lol i thot i read 13 in ur profile...

Viva 05-26-05 10:00 PM

lol it wasnt a mistake uit says u R 13 in ur profile!

MyNamesGrafhYall 05-27-05 08:40 AM

Voted For: b-gurl

k you gonna regret battling me-- once im done youll see
this girl is probably a drug whore-- every night she hopes to score
she goes to raves to get drunk-- passes out and hits the floor, kerplunk
she wakes up next to her naked mom-- then the night before hit her like a bomb
the next night she does the same, sleeps with ned-- wakes up with her dad in her bed
this girl's fucked up big time-- get some counseling it wont cost you a dime

Bradley Yo Shit Wuz Jus Wrong Hommie, Watz With Da 1 Line Rhymin Multies Lyke Dat? It Makes Da Flow In Da Verse Way Off, U Dint Really Hit Wit Any Punchez Neither, U Tried Using Her Sexuality Against Her, An If U Gon Do Dat, U Better Be Sure Itz Creative & Hard Hitting, U Jus Didnt Have Enuff 2 Offer On Da Punchline Side Of Da Battle


Oh my god, what kinda name is bradley thomas, i can tell already dat u gon be a bore
Fuck i've seen 12 yr old baby mommas but u still 'more of a whore'
Dayum! i jus checked this kids only 13, hes still prepubescent!!
I'm like a bent school teacher cuz im 'fuckin his ass' up but only 2 teach him a lesson!
dont mess wit the best,jus gimme 8 lines and I'm through
I'll make u realise that ur wack n u'll leave rap to sing the blues!
I gotta hand it to him tho, kids brave, i gave him the chance to opt out
but he didnt,acceptin that i was gna beat his ass without a doubt!

U Had Sum Iight Rhymes Gurl, At Least U Had Punchez An Yo Verse Flowed Lyke An Actual Verse, I Wuznt Feelin Da Opening Bar, Second Line Wuz Prety Played An Da First Line Wuz 2 Stretched, But Yo Verse Got Better, Da Lesson Line Wuz Real Nice, U Wrapped Da Battle Up In Dat Bar Alone, Keep Up Da Good Work Gurl

Vote/ B-Gurl, A No Contest

DA RIPPA 05-27-05 10:17 PM

Voted For: b-gurl

yo my vote goes to b-gurl honestly this is a weak battle but she had better rhyme skill flow was good way better punches both need to elevate but this goes to b
holla and return the faver

Daubs 05-31-05 12:54 PM

Voted For: b-gurl

ok, brad, your structure was original.......but wack, no punches, you even used a mum line which is a nono.

b, your verse was aight and you actually landed punches and had a decent structure..

brad you need to hit some tuts up breh......

no hate, b-gurl return the favour so i dont need to DQ this vote :thumbup:

BiZzO 06-03-05 10:38 PM

Voted For: b-gurl

ok this was a wack battle by bradley but B you had a good verse... break down...

bradley -
ok you gonna regret battling me-- once im done youll see
this girl is probably a drug whore-- every night she hopes to score
^^ pathetic, was this ment to be a punch?
she goes to raves to get drunk-- passes out and hits the floor, kerplunk
she wakes up next to her naked mom-- then the night before hit her like a bomb
^^^ ehh wack...
the next night she does the same, sleeps with ned-- wakes up with her dad in her bed
this girl's fucked up big time-- get some counseling it wont cost you a dime
^^^ wack...
2/10...

B -
Oh my god, what kinda name is bradley thomas, i can tell already dat u gon be a bore
Fuck i've seen 12 yr old baby mommas but u still 'more of a whore'
^^ ehh ok, not realli feelin it..
Dayum! i jus checked this kids only 13, hes still prepubescent!!
I'm like a bent school teacher cuz im 'fuckin his ass' up but only 2 teach him a lesson!
^^ ok, needed a bit of rewording..
dont mess wit the best,jus gimme 8 lines and I'm through
I'll make u realise that ur wack n u'll leave rap to sing the blues!
^^^ yeah thats gettin betta.. good punch..
gotta hand it to him tho, kids brave, i gave him the chance to opt out
but he didnt,acceptin that i was gna beat his ass without a doubt!
^^^ decent closer
6/10

good battle B, Bradley u need to improve stacks that was wack dawg..

rtf please..


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