Phenom-in-all vs FuxJustAWord
 

Battle Rules:

8-12 lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No D/r
etc.....
Phenom gets my KLL Title if he wins

im makin it a day....... if u drop earlier, just pm me wen u drop and ill def. drop mine as soon as possible after that.... at the most an hour later


Minimum posts to vote: 300

Check in by: 05-26-05 at 10:19 PM

Must drop verse in 1440 minutes after check in.

Phenom-in-all has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-26-05 09:51 PM.

FuxJustAWord has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-26-05 09:54 PM.

PHENOM'S FIRST TEXT LMAOOO

aight, enjoy.... LOL

I'm real, you want attention like children-singers
I drop Fux.. like I'm cuttin off middle-fingers

I'd fly-down to chi-town, just to say goodbye-clown
so why-pout, when my-mouth, will make you all out cry-now

Fought to buy back ya no-show, cause ya record is so-so
like cali wavin a : nono : :nono:, you got no chance you homo

C'mon-I-hate-text, make this a song-and-make-tracks
You so fem, the only time you rule is as a Dom-in-a-trix

I'ma wrap this up, like I forgot to, your girls holdin my seed
don't do like you did in the tourny - be bold, and don't feed

Next time lets do audio, cause we know I bust-on-herbs
you couldn't touch me audio or text, so fux just-a-word

did u post ur shit???????????????//????????????????

yeah you dumbass.... You gon no show? haha... Just takes the full day to write shit... thats wack.

WTF...... I could rewrote my shit 30 times.... If I'da known you were going to take this long I would have too.

lmao@ that shit......... i havent even thought about writin this shit yet...... i just got home, and im prolly gonna no show cuz i gotta go in 15 minutes to chill with sum friends... if i get it done by than.... than ill post

wack.............................................. .......

dude, you wack like Cool J songs, might as well drop it all
No skills, just headsprung, hey... its somethin like a phenom in all
im bombin yall, like evictions bitch, get the hell out
as nice as the new star wars movies, cuz you just a fuckin sellout...
you lookin scared while im flexin this knife, im perplexin his mic
hows he winnin this fight? he aint neva battled text in his life
Jay Z's a phenomenon... while you admitted you was gay and wack
blood turns dark after a while, so maybe we'll love it when you fade to black...
this man's the K O King? i wrestle and beat fools, you aint been betta
you couldnt rap a decent punch usin characters from Def Jam, Vendetta

if you didnt get it...
-ll cool j made a song called head sprung and somethin like a phenomenon
-Phenom has never battled text before
-Phenom posted a thread admitting he was wack and gay
-Jay Z has a song where he says "maybe you'll love me when i fade to black"

This was feedback posted for Phenom-in-all
 

some tips if u plan to continue text... dont hyphen random multies just so ppl know its a multie
dont separate ur lines like that. keep it one paragraph or whatever, otherwise, it looks weird. im glad u didnt use links bc thats garbage... otherwise, u had some pretty good multies. unfortunately, most of ur punches were played (not your fault) the second line didnt make too much sense to me but i liked that cali line. its so much like him...
just some feedback for ya.... good luck wit text if u continue it

upiin this.............................................. ......

1) I admitted i was gay and wack? lol. no... fake punch...
2) The def jam vendetta line has been used in every single battle I've ever been in... and MY lines were played? LOL
3) I added the hyphens so cats could GET my multi's. In audio you can hear it, but it aint like im doin another text so its whatever lol.
4) I dropped half an hour after this was opened, you dropped 24 hours after...

anyways - good battle, you must feel lucky - the only cat to ever see Phenom/Vendetta in text, too bad this another K.O. for me ;):thumbup:

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Voted For: Phenom-in-all

V// Phenom...
IP:


dude, you wack like Cool J songs, might as well drop it all
No skills, just headsprung, hey... its somethin like a phenom in all----wack line homie
im bombin yall, like evictions bitch, get the hell out
as nice as the new star wars movies, cuz you just a fuckin sellout...---filler in derr...didn't flow well at all...
you lookin scared while im flexin this knife, im perplexin his mic
hows he winnin this fight? he aint neva battled text in his life---decent..
Jay Z's a phenomenon... while you admitted you was gay and wack
blood turns dark after a while, so maybe we'll love it when you fade to black...---no
this man's the K O King? i wrestle and beat fools, you aint been betta
you couldnt rap a decent punch usin characters from Def Jam, Vendetta---nice try?

against

I'm real, you want attention like children-singers
I drop Fux.. like I'm cuttin off middle-fingers--ha nice opener
I'd fly-down to chi-town, just to say goodbye-clown
so why-pout, when my-mouth, will make you all out cry-now---naww...

Fought to buy back ya no-show, cause ya record is so-so
like cali wavin a : nono : , you got no chance you homo---ha nice

C'mon-I-hate-text, make this a song-and-make-tracks
You so fem, the only time you rule is as a Dom-in-a-trix---yo das a female hoe who rules her John...so ya'll kno..anyways...decent line

I'ma wrap this up, like I forgot to, your girls holdin my seed
don't do like you did in the tourny - be bold, and don't feed -- ha nice special effects?

Next time lets do audio, cause we know I bust-on-herbs
you couldn't touch me audio or text, so fux just-a-word---cudda been bedda but i guess..

Yo Phenom had betta lines..structure kinda audio-y but what can u expect...Fux..did u not think he wud drop decent? i'ono but yo Phenom Got it Easy to Me..

This was feedback posted for Phenom-in-all
 

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