confidential vs Fumin
 

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No Recycling
No Biting
No Hate
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3-0 K.O.

Minimum posts to vote: 400

Check in by: 05-27-05 at 10:08 AM

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Fumin has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-27-05 09:39 AM.

This bitch is crap, intended to battle me, is like shaking hands with defeat.
But hey, i'ma throw this match away, when this dickheads doused in gasoline.
Inflated ego because he got into GW, but i'll pound this fucking poser.
When con paused for thought, everyone thought he lapsed into a coma!
Your text is weak kid, so i'll drop on this joker so he can "read & weep".
So i'ma make like Alcatrackz......Because i got this dope beat.
My bars done smashed you, so please kid just stop fighting.
Or i'll make like a ninja on holiday...
.............................................& " resort to violence ".

If you don't get the punches/wordplay then don't vote :thumbup:.

confidential has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-27-05 10:00 AM.

even thou u pre-wrote probley
IT's NOTING IM A MONSTER IN RAP.....

check....
Think U flow like water? Then call me dirt as I leave ya murked
Yawning! As I'm smashin fumin to pieces like Quarry-Work....
On the road to success, homos got his thumbs-up tryin to hitch-hike
fumin punchin in combos?.. only when he lockin-up Push-Bikes!....
fumin spit for the world... so like polution i'll be u'r environmental disasters
U Bastards u are stupid!... 4 Predicting quick win(d)s like foolish forecasters... *HA*

fumin Man, U couldn't even make a playwright quoting from Shakespear
I'm "Trampoline" this boy career, like "backyard play-gear!".... BITCH....

ya pre-written just got shitted on EZZZZZ......

Lmao, you really think that shitted on my verse? Lmao, well we'll see what the voters think. Upping.

This was feedback posted for Fumin
 

If I Culd Vote Mah Vote uld Go 2 Fumin, He Had Dat Fiyah

Voted For: Fumin

close battle... this was good considering you both new ight imma break it down....

con:

Think U flow like water? Then call me dirt as I leave ya murked
Yawning! As I'm smashin fumin to pieces like Quarry-Work....
^^ nice opener decnt punch coudlav been worded better 6/10
On the road to success, homos got his thumbs-up tryin to hitch-hike
fumin punchin in combos?.. only when he lockin-up Push-Bikes!....
nice punch good wordplay 7/10
fumin spit for the world... so like polution i'll be u'r environmental disasters
U Bastards u are stupid!... 4 Predicting quick win(d)s like foolish forecasters... *HA*
not feelin this one 5/10
fumin Man, U couldn't even make a playwright quoting from Shakespear
I'm "Trampoline" this boy career, like "backyard play-gear!".... BITCH....
not bad couldav been better though 5.5/10

overall i thought u had a good solid verse some of it couldav been better but u did good in this battle.... keep it up.

23.5/ 40


fumin:

This bitch is crap, intended to battle me, is like shaking hands with defeat.
But hey, i'ma throw this match away, when this dickheads doused in gasoline.
^^ good opener decent worplay platyed concept though 6/10
Inflated ego because he got into GW, but i'll pound this fucking poser.
When con paused for thought, everyone thought he lapsed into a coma!
^^ lol never hear tht before 7/10
Your text is weak kid, so i'll drop on this joker so he can "read & weep".
So i'ma make like Alcatrackz......Because i got this dope beat.
^^ good i spose dint rlly get the last bit 6/10
My bars done smashed you, so please kid just stop fighting.
Or i'll make like a ninja on holiday...
.............................................& " resort to violence ".
^^ nice closure played again tho 5.5/10

overall u had some good shit in there but some of it was played u need to think of better concepts for them and you eill be onyour way try top fix up your structure though and u'll get better you'll see

24.5/40

this was a close battle... but imma havwe to give it to fumin he had less played concepts in some of his punches he did have some shit i'd never heard before so thats why im voting for him

con u did good but i felt tht fumin just came better no hate and pz...

pish........

condome hes pre-writtens no matter hes weak cuz it took him all last night to come up with that upp'in for more votes....

what you mean... his verse beat your's lol i said u had some good shiot but his was better... hense he spent more time on it lol

Voted For: Fumin

Fum

This bitch is crap, intended to battle me, is like shaking hands with defeat.
But hey, i'ma throw this match away, when this dickheads doused in gasoline.

HAHAHAHA DOPE PUNCH...

Inflated ego because he got into GW, but i'll pound this fucking poser.
When con paused for thought, everyone thought he lapsed into a coma!

NICE PERSONAL PUNCH..

Your text is weak kid, so i'll drop on this joker so he can "read & weep".
So i'ma make like Alcatrackz......Because i got this dope beat.

COULD BEEN WORDED BETTER BUT NICE PUNCH..

My bars done smashed you, so please kid just stop fighting.
Or i'll make like a ninja on holiday...
.............................................& " resort to violence ".

FUNNY CLOSER.

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CONF

Think U flow like water? Then call me dirt as I leave ya murked
Yawning! As I'm smashin fumin to pieces like Quarry-Work....

PRETTY NICE, GOOD OPENER

On the road to success, homos got his thumbs-up tryin to hitch-hike
fumin punchin in combos?.. only when he lockin-up Push-Bikes!....

HAHAHA YEAH

fumin spit for the world... so like polution i'll be u'r environmental disasters
U Bastards u are stupid!... 4 Predicting quick win(d)s like foolish forecasters... *HA*

PRETTY NICE.

fumin Man, U couldn't even make a playwright quoting from Shakespear
I'm "Trampoline" this boy career, like "backyard play-gear!".... BITCH....

OK CLOSER...

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OK, BOTH CAME HARD AND BOTH VERSES WERE PACKED WIT DOPE PUNCHES, BUT FUM SEEMED TO BE HARDER HITTING AND MORE CONSISTANT. BOTH VERSES FLOWED WELL, AIGHT STRUCTURES BUT FUMIN GETS THIS.

CONF YOU CAME HARD, JUST NOT GOOD ENOUGH HERE.

NO HATE
RTF IN SIG.

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