KhAoZ ThEoRy vs Young Dollar
 

Battle Rules: Battle Rap

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Normal rules do watcha do homie

Minimum posts to vote: 80

Check in by: 05-30-05 at 09:15 PM

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KhAoZ ThEoRy has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-28-05 10:24 AM.

U Gonna Stay A Free Agent, I Advize DonT Get Ya Hopez Up
''Hot Bills''? Only Tyme U Been ''On Ice'' Is Playin Witta ''Hockey Puck''
PM'd Me, Sayin ''Dont Duck?'' But Why The Fuck Wuld I?
U Aint ''Alignin'' Yo Texts Rite, Lyke U Only Got 1 ''Good Eye''
I Wuld Cry, Not Frum Da Challenge, But Frum Da Laughz
U Culd Get On My Front Lawn, An U Still Unsure Bout ''Crossin My Path''
''Vote Or Die Niggaz''? Datz A Thin Line, But I Think They Choose Da Latter
U'd Think My Rhymez Wuzza ''Nine'' Cuz Diz Kid ''Runs & Scatters''
Yo Verses Are Juz Fillers, Dat Makez Ya' Beef Authentic Az ''I-Hop''
Dick Play? U Aint Been ''Touched'' Lyke A Jewish Kid Scared Ov Da Chop
Ur ''Gased Up'' On ''Root BEER''...So Now U CanT Think Straight!?
Ask Pac ''If Heaven Got A Ghetto''
U AINT NICE! Tho, I Got A Mil Dat God Wuldnt Even Let U Past Da Front GATE
GangstATLANTA? I'll ''Bang-Head-Bounce-ya'' An Do Dat A-Town Stomp
Lyke Yo Cyphers, U Aint ''Servin'' No Punz 4 Uz Niggaz 2 CHOMP
Enter A Special ED Comp. An Even Da Dyslexics ''Get U Right''
Dey Said....''Wear Gary Colemanz Attire, Then U'll Be TIGHT!''



All Da Wordz In Bold Frum Da Quote U Will Find In Da Verse

Young Dollar has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-28-05 02:16 PM.

I know on da real dis nigga wont come *guns sparkin*
So i'll bust a nut in dudes mouths, so nigga can *cum talkin*

Where did u get ya *game from*...........
yo skillz is like Whitney Houston's weight,you need ta *gain some*
So dont fuck wit me,Ill *dish chrome*dat'll leave ya *shit blown*
cause dis dudes got 'less hooks' than a no *fish zone*/

Ya verses u do should be called *drastic flops*
and if you so sick,why u still on da street like *traffic cops*

U will never be a Boy in Da Hood,ridin in a *wax layer body Jag*
Unless u just in da hood white chalk,in a *tax payer body bag*

N I checked ya old post,i got rhymes to make ya brain *rupture*
Da only thing dat was khaoctic about dude,was just his *structure*

Homies rap cuz His John told em, He cant *See this*
Cuz shawty just a fat white boy who cant see his *penis*

Merk niggas wit guns N *Rhymes*,
to merk ya body N lyrical *Mind*

To Me Your just another sorry *Heaven Filler*
Cuz If your a Livin Legend Then Im a *Legend Killer*


True story...You dont know wat *thug bout*, niggas ~act~, *guns out*, blow his ~back~ to his *buns out*,squeese da ~mac~,till it *runs out*,

Put a crome glock to ya *brain N Temple*, *Plain N simple*,
Guns start singin as if it was Shirly *Temple*

N ya fam knows da scenario of you bein *lost...scary*
Now thats wat da fuck u call a *Khaos Theory*


No Disrespect to neither Livin Legends got mad love N respect for dem folks. Nor to KT. Keep doin yall thang

VOTE OR DIE BITCHES!!!!!!!!!!!!!

nice battle folk i think i need to slow down on my punches cuz i think im givin to many

Cccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccccc Vote Vote Vote !!!!!!"""

Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy

lol very one sided... khaoz u have elevated alot since u joined props to you it took me like 1 year to elevate and u nearly as good as me but i was wacker than u so it evens out lol... n e wyz i felt u owned the shit out of him u had some good lines in there some were played somer wenrt but u did enough....

young... u nned help homie... sort out your structure

make your lines like this:

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instead of this:

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get me if u do that it will help on your structure get that right first and then get your punches in there... your punches wernt rlly hittin u had played concepts and u basically just need to think of better concepts and how to word them...

thats it


v/ khaoz

for having harder punches better structure and all over better verse...

keep droppin em you'll get better man trust me pzzzzzzzz

n no hate :thumbup:

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still uppin for more votes............................................. .

Thru Da Wire, 2 Da Wall, All Mah Rhymez Iz Raw, All Deez Beats Beats Beats, All Ov Em Culd Of Been Lost!--=--Kanye West (Thru The Wire Alternative Lyrics)

Still uppin for more votes
tippin for more votes
pimpin for more votes
shit i made a rap for more votes

Still trippin for more votes
kickin for more votes
bitchin for more votes
i even made a song for more votes

more votes....im tippin
Feedback im grippin
I be doin da name rippin to da rain trippin
gimme votes or ya dane missin
Me on haze i aint trippin
stay finger flippin on da curb pimpin
Cuz back den didnt vote me
Now im hot all on me
back den didnt vote me
now im hot all on me
I said!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
back den didnt vote me
now im hot all on me
Cuz i Who
Dollar Doll
Who?
Dollar Doll
Who?
Dollar Doll


lol jus messin but im thinkin bout postin it just to see some feedback

Voted For: Young Dollar

YD:

Hot shit...wasnt expecting this

Multies were nice, punches hit hard and got him where it hurts

Personals were there, but they couldve been harder.

Your structure was fine, so really no problem with your flow.

KT:

Ok man, honestly not the best that I have seen from you.

Punches lacked creativity, and you were not as consistent as you have been in past battles.

Personals were ok, but everything else you kinda fell off on.

However, structure was fine, and so was the flow, but flow is not what wins a battle, punchlines are.

Based on that, I am giving my vote to Young Dollar for his consistency with his punches

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Ha Ha Ok, Letz Get Sum Proper Ass Voes In Diz Battle Plz

uppin for more votes ay niggas got they own opinions...niggas see shit differently./but either way no hate cuz i think dis was a nice battle