Help me lord (please read)
 

The government wanna hide the truth, so they jus go and blame it on the youth
Its not our fault that bad shit happens, we jus tryin to make it through by rappin
Thats the only way for a nigga to get out the gutter, but keep ya head up brother
Cos theres a life after death, and we can go to heaven if we put our lives to the test
Remember theres hope like 2pac sed, but the next week he got shot dead
So that makes me question, how we gon survive when niggas want me restin
God shower me with blessings, I need it to evaporate my sins, I learnt my lesson
Help me lord, Im bleedin with please, Im on my knees make me see
The light ive been looking for, I give up the life of money and whores
Open the door to me and those caught up in the struggle
Cos I know the Lord loves us, we jus need to pray to the person above us
And then he'll set us free, like Moses did by seperating the seas
So all people believe me, pray to the Most High, dont be afraid to die
Cos when we die well be with the Lord, aint nothing better than that
Remember theres hope, cos I can see light emerging from that crack.

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damn man good shit i cant be mad at this...flow was good topic good emotion was deep rhymes good use a lil work but other then that this was a good piece...speak the truth homie....7/10

thanks homie, uppin dis

good shit man, keep at it i like the whole topic of the rhyme.. good ishhh

thank you uppin dis

uppin dis......holla at me

Hey man, glad to hear about your conversion. Liked the way the words flowed and the rhymin scheme was good. Keep it up man, and God bless.

conversion? I aint even christian but I believe in God, Im muslim,but no hate we jus appreciate