Half 'a Verse
 

I'm notta booster, holding 3 clips in a ruger, In the face of a loser,
then embrace like a cougar/
I'm humble with talent, don't stumble, I'm on balance/
Don't crumble, I drop planets, In rumbles, I stop challenges/
On the fifth exit (Highway), I stuff and pluck chicks, with stuff like tuff bricks,
with love like virgin dicks/
Her ass be real sacred, with coke pre-crack, her hole re-stacked, whole re-packed, bitch, don't look back/--
I didn't have tha motive to finish it, I didnt feel like killin it either ; /
anywayz

-Feed Back-

this wuz too short and your structure needs to be improved, your vocab wuz not too bad .

ye, i kno about the shortness, but what do ppl mean about structure??/