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Squad Bangaz - Pistol Pistol (Remix)
I told you 3+ times about the uppin rules.
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i originally love this beat. i aint goin no where without my pistol pistoll... starts with chorus, i dont like the chorus... they dont know me like ti? line was gay... i dont like this guys lyrics but he got a good voice, just usin tha worst punches i ever heard... i think he raps over the hook... his verse is mad long lol... i want it over... chorus again... the chorus is kinda bland, but its aight... 20 now, ahhh grant ya death wish y do u recycle lines on every single track man? write some new shyt i know u can.. d blocked up c'mon man, the cobra clutch line again too? damn man, that disapointed me. the lyrics was better than first dude... but ferreal write new shyt... aight looyd banks is on now.. lol ... no emotion but i think u shinin on this... u spittin like not fast but u make ya syllabols sound fast how u pronounce them. yea your verse was my favorite... the lyrics on this track were laggin man... but it was better than the majority of the shyt i hear on this site... keep it up
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hook was aiight...20, you got like the best voice for rap man, lol...ya flow could've been better this, was kinda off at the beginnnig...bars were aiight, but nothing I haven't heard before, you're so much better than this now QUIT SLACKING!! ::slaps you::
S-Large, you sound just like 20 man =/...but yeah, your lyrics were better than 20's...that "opera" line was kewl kyd...ya flow wasn't as smooth as it couldah been on the end, pauses wer a bit too long, but shit was nyce duke... Vendetta, your part stands out most cuz of ya multies, only thing you need to work on is ya emotion, sound too laid back on a track like this where you kinda talkin' shit, but yours was the best, seemed shorter than the others though, but good ish... good track overall kiddies = )... |
ayo im 2nd.. lol the opera line is me!!! me!!! lol
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well then switch shit around hahaa...
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shoulda had me throw in a verse in the place of the first dude. i woulda taken a shat on this beat.....
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aight ima leave some real feed on this shit...
chorus..is blah needs hella work...heres a tip from a nigga thats makin moves and kno niggas thats makin it...- to make a mainstream type track hot..u HAVE to POSITIVELY have a great chorus..it cant be just good enough..it has to be hot and catchy..this chorus aint to good its kinda borin really...first guy is meh..he bored me his flow was good on beat tho... 20 its ok..but i see that Omen said that u recycled lines..so blah..i heard that cobra clutch line before..when i was whippin earlier..think cassidy said that...:nono: Debit..flow is ok...lyrics are ok...style just aint workin for me...that damn voice too..:laugh: overall this track was kinda borin..maybe its the beat and the chorus..or maybe beckuz im tired..i dunno maybe a more uptempo beat woulda made it betta... |
naw i didnt recycle, belee dat
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Beat is fire...
Feelin 20 on this shit Everyone did nice tho... Hot ass track yall!! |
wow, what profound feedback, leave something more than that nigra, lol...
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naw i didnt recycle, belee dat
^ man... must i post links to the tracks you already said these lines in? 357 thatll grant ya death wish i heard on that joint u did over the dipset beat the cobra clutch line was in tahth joint mobster we did waaaaaay back in tha day and the d'blocked up line was in another track we did a long ass time ago... there's no reason to lie about it like ur ashamed. its straight i kno alot of people do it im just saying this..... how do you expect to elevate to a new level when you are stuck repeating the same lyrics you wrote months ago? just think about it im tryin to give u sumn to brainstorm off of... |
prove i recyled.. cuz i didnt, if i did... it must have been YEARS AGO and even i dont remember
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prove i recyled.. cuz i didnt, if i did... it must have been YEARS AGO and even i dont remember
^ lol dude y wont you be an honest man and admit it, lol i noticed that you deleted some of your tracks that had your recycled shyt, so the 357 line is non existant now, but you can still find the other 2 recyclers on my page.... bars of madness, and mobster is the tracks you recycled lyrics from.... y must i expose people, u think i like this shyt!!!!???? no, i dont y must you put me on the spot and prove you wrong man? |
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