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UNF 05-29-05 12:08 AM

-Love Note-
 



Dear Kisha:
True Story

Since The Eight Grade We've Bin Friends & Lovers
Nights We Use To Sleep At Then End Of The Covers
Now It's All Down The Drain And It Can't Be Changed
From The Monkey Bars, And The Time's Full Of Games
Missing Them Day's Wishing I Could Flip Hands Of Time
So We Could Walk In The Sand While The Moon Shines
When Ever I Look At The Sky.....It Reminds Me Of You
I Love You And That's The Define Of The Word Truth
I Don't Know How To Deal With It, I Still Can't Belive
We Was In Love Deeply I Never Though You'd Leave
You Received All The Love I Could Give You And More
We Even Had Some Connections Like Two And Four
To And From School We'd Hold Hands Just Walking
Spend More Time Together Then Apart Just Talking
Now That Your Out Of My Life It Just Went Colder
Ever Since The Day You Said.......This Shit's OVER

Love Always:Jason Perez

50Cal. 05-29-05 12:55 AM

this also aint a poem this is a damn opem mic emotion and flow was good imagery was a lil lacking but decent it was a lil too short though overall decent drop a 6/10
keep this in open mic this aint a poem.........

UNF 05-29-05 09:56 PM

Yes Sirrr, It's Me Anamosity Hommie, Lol

Macca 05-30-05 12:35 AM

This reminds me of Katrina. Shit thanx for bringing back bad memories. Just playing foo. This was nice. I hope you actally gace this to her and if you did I would wish I was man enough to do the same to Katrina. But nice drop. It was very creative and came from the heart. Keep thgem coming jason.

RTF or else...

UNF 05-30-05 05:41 AM

Lol Thanks Man, Yea I Gave It To Here She Tripped And Ran Off So I Was like What The Fuck Ever Guh

MC IgGY 06-01-05 10:25 PM

i liked it, felt da emotion
u should use a lil more imagery.

UNF 06-29-05 12:12 AM

Buping This Shits, Lmao!

Texxus 07-06-05 03:46 PM

and you're not Maximus Merdirus aka all your other alias(1that use to be zeke) why did you deny it...well if its like that nigka then fuck you too...


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