Memorial Day Weekend pt.2..........Please Look
 

I will always miss you Grandpa


Dear Grandpa:


My Only Best Friend, in this world, you were my Grandpa
I know you had Cancer, I just hope I had a answer
You were the person, that I wished to grow as The Man To Be
Why couldn’t you stay, why’d you have to leave this family
Everybodys doing bad now
My father, my uncles, they all sad, living life without a dad now
Some one lost a good brother, some one lost a Good Cousin
They say A Bullet hurts you the most, buh now I see that it really doesn’t
Everybodys gotta die someday, yea I know its like that
But I’d really trade my soul, just to bring ya life back
I cant wait to see you again, buh I know I gotta be pacient
But I’d do anything, to just have one last conversation
I know everything will be alright, you’ll look upon us and keep us safe
Im glad the cancer is all over and your in a better place
Went through a couple boxes of tissue, going through this major issue
Im just writing this letter to tell you ill never forget, and Ill always miss you


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gonna miss grandpa yo....good shit cuz...i hope he is reading these messages right now...and knowin dat we thinkin bout him..good rap tho..loved it

thanks cuz...........................................

Very strong emotion of course, it's good you can write this because I'm sure your grandpa is looking down on you and this is filling his heart with happiness. I bet he is proudly watching over you from heaven. May his soul rest in peace and may he forever live on within your hearts...

thanks queen, i really do appreciate that, you juss made me feel a little better for real.......thanks

Nice strong piece. To Short though, in my opinion. Alot of areas to improve, but I dont think you were going for OM of the month... just letting your soul breath. Keep it up man. Peace.

Naw i wasnt goin for the Om of the month, juss letin my soul breathe like you said, thanks though, good lookin Mentalz...............Uppin