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Message 2 U Weak Niggaz

Yo I flow deep like bullet heat in yo lungs,
Vocab so wide it's like i'm speakin in tongues,
When I start shootin verbs i see niggas run,
When i take da mic i know you weak niggas done,
Yo I see you tryna step hard barin teeth,
Oh look my finger slipped, now they layin a wreath,
Oh look my finger slipped, now yo ass decease,
Oh look da trigger dipped, nigga rest in peace,
Yo i be more raw than bloody slab of meat g,
Only because certain niggas think they can beat me,
Phoney niggas, ain't battled, still talkin nonsense,
Only thing weaker than you niggas is my conscience,
Yo i ain't even gotta mention a name, they
Know exactly who i be talkin bout same way,
I ain't seen them battle too tough, but they claim they,
Capable of makin a judgement, it's a shame they,
Chose to cross a dark minded motherfucker g
Takin me for pathetic, ok then we'll see...

Yo uppin for feedback people...

dayummmmmmm nigga u hot, frssh 2 def man, tht was good, i like ure style, yo we shud collab pm me and well sort summin out

ok was ok, good vocab used...nice flow throughout, just not feelin the whole thing although it was nice in places.

thanx.
uppin for more feedback.......................

my bad i didnt know i had to leave a link

heres one:

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193468