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Dig ya own grave, TBN DISS
TITLE: Dig Ya Own Grave HOOK: Clappin at LL,y'all bitches gonna end up dead.. Us fam stick together......fill ya chest wit lead.. Wack twats cant clap..which all kinda figures.. And we all know TBN, is the BITCH AS NIGGAS.. DAUBS: Herbs spittin fire?, not a soul on RV even pretends to fuckin like ya... And your crew must be packed wit herbs..If even ya leader is a biter!! So easy to get wit those Throw Backs, wanted me to join and begged me.. And if y'all so fuckin dope.......why's ya merked crews forum empty!! Oh and yeah, fucka red....pussys, you gonna be raisin the white flag.. And wouldn't fuck wall streets mother, Even if she rocked a plastic bag!! Stupid fuckin whores, aint competiton....there just practice at best.. And havnt got a single crew sig..so how the fucks 50 bars a gfx head!! The way you dogs are petting us..........just shows ur tryna kiss us.. Yall wack so it kinda figures, that the TBN..is the bitch ass niggas!! Clappin at LL,y'all bitches gonna end up dead.. Us fam stick together......fill ya chest wit lead.. Wack twats cant clap..which all kinda figures.. And we all know TBN, is the BITCH AS NIGGAS.. M-Eazy: Time for these niggas to really get thrown back Throwin sticks and stones my way, I'ma drop a couple bucks on ya grave Young Eazy don't play...ya whole crew is a crew full of gays Livin' Legendz is fed up today Internet gang bangin...who he think he is, E-Pac or somethin Made a alias...but he's not for nuthin This nigga be bitin...aint writin his own verse, and now he hatin on Young Time to show this mutha fucka where I'm from... It's that Livin Legend shit... Ride or Die, my Young Legendz got clips Send em to ya lips, cause he's not Legit (Dig ya own grave Bitch!) Livin' niggas on tha scene and shit...Wanna act like slaves, you'll get hit wit tha whip And now ya know, now we clear, that we behind this shit Daubs, show these mutha fuckas what time it is (mind ya lips) Clappin at LL,y'all bitches gonna end up dead.. Us fam stick together......fill ya chest wit lead.. Wack twats cant clap..which all kinda figures.. And we all know TBN, is the BITCH AS NIGGAS.. Kid~ca$: i held my tongue fer a bit,and i tried to be polite...... bitch u dont even write,it takes a failure to bite...... u aint beatin no-one,but its a funny asumption..... like erry one knowz bout your penis consumption...... takin shotz at our crew well tha bulletz r bouncin...... aint gonna kill yall,just gonna make ya need councling..... you would tuck your flag in,if u walked through tha HOODZ..... yo .LL why we wastin our time,its obvious no one else would.... and for tha rest of your crew,yall r gonna get smashed..... so pay attention bitches,and get them dikks out yo ass..... cause well take your imaginary brickz and flip em like a cement mason..... you fake bitches got WHORED(HORRORED)like u were freddy and jason..... Clappin at LL,y'all bitches gonna end up dead.. Us fam stick together......fill ya chest wit lead.. Wack twats cant clap..which all kinda figures.. And we all know TBN, is the BITCH AS NIGGAS.. KhAoZ ThEoRy: ''Bloodshot'' Eyes, Niggas High, Crack-Pot Thinkin He Hit Da JackPot I'll Have Yall ''Makin Out'' Wit Da 16 Rounds Dat Da Mack Got Ya Not Hot! Wannabe G! I'm Frum California, Da Berrettas Bigga Punchez? Naw, Yall Got None, Faggotz Get ''Passed Around'' Lyke Lyrikal Swingers But U Cant ''THROW BACK, Niggas'' Get'cha Brain Blown Quicker Than Tommy On Goodfellas U Called Uz Out Then Ducked! But If We're Pussy, Then Pleaze Tell Uz! Yall Juz Yella! Fuck Wall Street, He Cant Even Slap a Bitch 2 ''Drop A Dyme'' Yo Leader Izza Mark! He Even Signed Me 2 Yall B4 I Dropped A Rhyme!! If Bein Lame Izza Crime, Yall Pleade Insanity 2 Escape Da Charges TBN Doin ''IT BIG?''..Letz All Hope They Dint Purchase Faulty [Penis]''Enlargers'' Itz Khaoz Theory, REMEMBER ME! Az Da Nigga U Culdda HAD..[in yo krew] Yall Gon'Get It ''So Bad'' U Gonna Dispize On Ya' Dad, Wish U Hadnt Been Born, & Tell Him Cummin Up Yo Momz Iz Da Reazon Ur MAD! Clappin at LL,y'all bitches gonna end up dead.. Us fam stick together......fill ya chest wit lead.. Wack twats cant clap..which all kinda figures.. And we all know TBN, is the BITCH AS NIGGAS.. Link: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192513 |
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Khaoz....WHOOO! U just showed them niggas aint on ya level homie...uppin
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not a bad diss
structure cud be improved flow was alright throughout daubs brought some killer lines, some of the best disses i seen ya drop Kid-Ca$ was basic in places but had some aight shit M-Eazy, ya flow was off in places i think, had some decent disses Khaoz, prolly had the best verse, nice disses and the wordplay was dope!!! overall: 6.5/10 |
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tight shit not bad at all
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This was a pretty good i thought it could have been alot better structure was okay, some people need to learn how to make ya flow on point... If you have lines that are stretched and some sorta it aint gonna have avery good flow...and probably off beat...yea but anyway had some nice punchlines , some good concepts , pretty good wordplay and vocab , Overall keep it up nice drop
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Yo Thanks 4 All Da Feedback
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^good lookin fam.......
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Ill quote a line from each person i think was nice or whatever
h and yeah, fucka red....pussys, you gonna be raisin the white flag.. And wouldn't fuck wall streets mother, Even if she rocked a plastic bag!! Had me rolling and kinda hit this was nice It's that Livin Legend shit... Ride or Die, my Young Legendz got clips Send em to ya lips, cause he's not Legit (Dig ya own grave Bitch!) Livin' niggas on tha scene and shit...Wanna act like slaves, you'll get hit wit tha whip Was pretty nice way to finish ur verse held my tongue fer a bit,and i tried to be polite...... bitch u dont even write,it takes a failure to bite...... Was str8 saw the attempt at wordplay at the end didnt really work but keep that up word play is dope and if u can master if it will help ur writing sooooooo much Get ''Passed Around'' Lyke Lyrikal Swingers But U Cant ''THROW BACK, Niggas'' Pretty raw felt u had the best verse out of the crew (i presume) a strong anchor Overall a good diss Return the favour with good feed please |
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