Young Dollar vs SNE DAWG
 

Battle Rules: Battle rap

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Its wat ever 3 day Check N Drop

Minimum posts to vote: 50

Check in by: 06-01-05 at 08:29 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

SNE DAWG has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-29-05 09:08 PM.

I jus write my rhymes and win, this nigga doesnt even know what happened
Am the best you can find in RV this nigga is just but the wacker
You only rap of your hooker days you spent at the boulevard
Bout you suckin dicks and swallowing cum, damn! That must´ve been hard
But fuck that shit, the fuck I care if you are a hooker or not
The only thing I know is that you rap like crap and am about to beat you up
You know it, to win me in a battle is like your havin your wet dream
But you gonna have to use your hand today cause you aint winnin this thing
I cant wait to laugh my ass of at the rhymes you got to say
You can sell all of them and get 0.2 cents for them on ebay
My words are like poisson and I am the snake of this battle
I jump and attack ya by surprise, I wont warn you with a rattle
Be ready nigga cause this dawg can make your whole life a madness
You can retreat and live what you got with your face hidden in sadness
Am starting to think that you aint got nothing to say about me
Thats why you want 3 days of wait without comin and fight me…

hey young you got to accept this thing dawg.......whateva ..bump

ok ill aacept it............................good luck

Young Dollar has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-05 06:38 PM.

Dont try me like Im coke, You'll get your body rattled
You berly got enuff post, to even vote on his own battle
Why talk shit, you dont drop bombs like da army
Cuz u New Dis World, Just like You "New to RV"
I got new hot shit, like when i use to rock a pampers
While you berly as fresh, as your dirty close hamper
Face da facts cat,you aint dude aint shit to show
Got rhymes lines like fast food, Got my shit to go
Your lines are fucked up, like they a freaky ass Nympho
You flashin ya moms tits,is da only way you get dough
And you stick to da rules, While I make a Diss to a Technical
U Reppin Other RapSites on RV,Nigga dat shit is Disrespectful

Small explanation........Nigga got a link to rapworlds.com on his sig on RV

Was gonna use some special vocab on dis but wasnt worth it So imma save it for a bigger nigga anyways Uppin N good luck homie

Voted For: Young Dollar

Aiight, a one-sided battle here.

Dollar, your verse was nice man. Punches were creative and actually hit. Wordplay was nice, and personals were pretty decent. Everything flowed well, and your structure was fine. Nice drop

SNE, you didnt really have any punches, just a bunch of shit thrown together. No wordplay or personals either. Try to elevate on your creativity and your consistency with your punches.

V/ Young Dollar

UPPIN AYo yall need to vote on dis battle n just get it over with

UPPIN somebody gimme 4 more quick votes so dis can end

Voted For: Young Dollar

Ok, I shouldn't even have to explain this, but I will.

Young Dollar gets the vote for throwing punches, having personals, using wordplay and metaphors, and for actually RHYMING!!!

SNE DAWG, half of your verse didnt rhyme kid, so u need some major elevation on that

This was feedback posted for Young Dollar
 

young dolla....

u had a decent flow some decenet personals, no real hard hitting punches but some decent ones...
creativeness u could of been slightly better at that but none the less not a bad verse... 7.0/10

DAWG......
u had a ok flow * which was the best thing u had going for u in this battle* u could of came alot harder with punches/personal wordness it was more of a story then u rhymeing diss;ing him getting at him u feel me u need more celever lines and get more creative with them dont just use simple lines i can basicly finish befor i read the rest.... just keep elevating fam u will get better.....

3.5/10

if i get 50 post will that vote count or no???????????????????????????????

Voted For: Young Dollar

V/Young dollar.....this was a weak battle....young came wit punchs that hit an personals that were consistent....also creative vocab an wordplay wit better structure......Sne...u came wit stretched lines that were played an not many personals...ebay lines are a no......No hate......RETURN THE FAVOR........./Young Dollar

im about to ask strobe if he can give me the win for dis battle cuz homie been inactive forever and a day.......... N i got more Votes