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technique 05-30-05 11:18 AM

Daubs vs accomplish
 
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No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-30-05 at 11:48 AM

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System 05-30-05 11:19 AM

accomplish has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-30-05 11:19 AM.

System 05-30-05 11:22 AM

Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-30-05 11:22 AM.

technique 05-30-05 11:31 AM

this fake ain't gonna last when i stab his back wid broken glass
and rip out his eyes till I got this mutha fucker in a open casts
your flows will never glow like the god damn rainbow
maby because your illiterate and you don't have a brain hoe
your talking is childish and your insults are 2 mild
he thinks he's got cock and balls but he's really suicidal
you get your neck snapped in half when u step up 2 real emcees
this boy is dead like autum leaves and i can blow his ass away like the breeze
damn! your as ugly as cheese so please stop rapping and freeze
you should be crowned wack so take the exit and just leave!

Daubs 05-30-05 11:34 AM

Claims he's accomplished....but the bitch never even had-a-sig..
And if you were tall and meen....you wouldn't be above average!!

I said i was gonna win, and not an RV head even showed a doubt..
And you tripped and admitted gayness...shows your down and out!!

Il remind ya how mad dog owned you...so ya can never say ya forgot..
And you could punch straws' weed......and wouldn't hit the jackpot!!

If your cheesy lines represented crisps id call accomplish a nik-nak..
And ya must have karate'd someones spine....the way he gets kickback!!

You remind me of a broken jigsaw, the way ya skill is missing...
Couls murder with a pen....and his raps wouldn't make a killing!!


1 should get it...
2 down and out = no money.... if you admit your gay, you comeout.
3 jack straw(should know him...) and weed can be called pot.
4 kick back = money paid illegally for favorable treatment
5 make a killing = make a lot of money

dont get the wordplay/punches, pm me or dont vote.

Daubs 05-30-05 11:34 AM

ok drop........good look..........................

technique 05-30-05 11:39 AM

yep... you too....................................

technique 05-30-05 01:05 PM

upping 4 votes....................................

technique 05-30-05 02:57 PM

upping this shit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Daubs 05-30-05 04:39 PM

up................................................ .........................

§ick§eed 05-30-05 05:29 PM

Voted For: Daubs

this fake ain't gonna last when i stab his back wid broken glass
and rip out his eyes till I got this mutha fucker in a open casts
first part was good...second was jus aiite
your flows will never glow like the god damn rainbow
maby because your illiterate and you don't have a brain hoe
nah tha hoe fucked it up...other than that nice line
your talking is childish and your insults are 2 mild
he thinks he's got cock and balls but he's really suicidal
huh?? that was a diss?? ok...
you get your neck snapped in half when u step up 2 real emcees
this boy is dead like autum leaves and i can blow his ass away like the breeze
shoulda said "with tha breeze" woulda sounded better
damn! your as ugly as cheese so please stop rapping and freeze
you should be crowned wack so take the exit and just leave!
nah wasnt feelin that...u critique boys? callin him ugly lol

ur verse got like a 5/10...needed better wordin, punches, some were jus forced


Claims he's accomplished....but the bitch never even had-a-sig..
And if you were tall and meen....you wouldn't be above average!!
jea this opener was mean...liked it
I said i was gonna win, and not an RV head even showed a doubt..
And you tripped and admitted gayness...shows your down and out!!
cam'ron?? lol...liked that shit too it was nicely worded
Il remind ya how mad dog owned you...so ya can never say ya forgot..
And you could punch straws' weed......and wouldn't hit the jackpot!!
this one was straight...nothin too good
If your cheesy lines represented crisps id call accomplish a nik-nak..
And ya must have karate'd someones spine....the way he gets kickback!!
karate lines r kinda played but urs connected
You remind me of a broken jigsaw, the way ya skill is missing...
Couls murder with a pen....and his raps wouldn't make a killing!!
real good closin line...both lines were tight

daubs took tha opener, middle, and closer...because accomplish's verse didnt have much affect...his rhymes were simple, he tried to get into it but most of it wasnt hard enough

check some of my battles...thanx...wun

Daubs 05-30-05 08:05 PM

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PrahJect 05-30-05 08:15 PM

Voted For: Daubs

I vote for Daubs and heres why yall:

Accomplish: rhymes were good, nice drop, you were good and when I was readin ures before I read Daubs I thought u were gonna win. You got a good way with words, you got talent brothha.

Daubs: He won it without a doubt with the humour and the way he did it all if you get me, if u dont let me show u. First I dont think he did greath opening but from :

Il remind ya how mad dog owned you...so ya can never say ya forgot..
And you could punch straws' weed......and wouldn't hit the jackpot!!

If your cheesy lines represented crisps id call accomplish a nik-nak..
And ya must have karate'd someones spine....the way he gets kickback!!

You remind me of a broken jigsaw, the way ya skill is missing...
Couls murder with a pen....and his raps wouldn't make a killing!!

he reallly merked you here. Daubs greath drop kept me laughin about the nik nak and the karate

PrahJect 05-30-05 08:17 PM

Also can you RTF in my battle gainst big dawg in my sig please thnks

Daubs 05-31-05 07:22 AM

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