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Daubs vs KhAoZ ThEoRy
Battle Rules:
6 Lines No Recycling No Biting Crew votes are allowed, we in the same crew. No hate, good luck fam. :thumbup: Minimum posts to vote: 100 Check in by: 05-30-05 at 12:37 PM Must drop verse in 15 minutes after check in. |
Daubs has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-30-05 12:14 PM.
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KhAoZ ThEoRy has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-30-05 12:19 PM.
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Puncture your lungs like a board with a dart.... Blowjob before the battle? Thats the only way you gonna have a head start!! This fools a coin so ima leave this hoe spun... Skippin over gats? Just proves to us.......that you jump the gun!! Not been KO'ed? Well ima have to make the first.. If ya girl was a sphere.. You still wouldn't manage to get a "round herr"!! 1 should get it.. 2 jump the gun = is a cheat 3 llocation says "round herrrre" if you dont get the punches and wordplay, Pm me or dont vote !!!!! yea was quick, good luck :thumbup: |
''UK Stand Up''...Be Counted, & Get Yo ''Arse'' Slain By Da Minority!
U Culd Have Cartman Reppin England & Nobodiez ''Respectin Yo Authority'' Sorry-Bee, Yo Rhymez R ''Evicted'' U Can Now Go Home It Aint Only Winz We Stealin Frum U, Itz Ya PHONE!!** Hand Daubs A ''Bone'' Diz Dawg Choked & Forgot 2 Chew Dat Diss 2 TBN, U Wuz Lame... Gave Uz A Bad Name, Cuz U Came Whacker Than They Krew! **=In My Mugshots Thread, We Wuz Talkin Bout My Cellphone An He Said He Had Hiz Phone Stolen lol Sorry Bout Da Carry On Line Daubs, Count It Az 1 bar |
hahahaha... good shit, and yeah i have that structure sometimes too....
good luck...upppppppp.... |
Haha U Had Dope Shit 2 Dawg, Shuld Be A Real Close Battle, Proppz Goez Out 2 U & Now U Know Y I Say U Shuld Be Co-Leader, I Murderd Casper Literally Wid Rhymez, U Are Mo Ov'a Challenge Datz 4sho Dawgy, Good Luck In Diz!
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ite good lookin...cas fam too hough, get me....
good luck. |
Voted For: KhAoZ ThEoRy
V/Khaoz theory...this was a good battle....khaoz came wit some hot punchs that were creative an had some personals structure was good....daubs....ur verse was ight u had ight structure but ur punchs weren't hitting hard to me i felt that u came to lightly in this one.....No hate.....RETURN THE FAOVR(or i will get this vote removed)..http://community.rapverse.com/showb...ad.php?t=189169 ^^^^^......... Opener=K Closer=K Structure=K Punchs=k multi's=Tie none really personals=K Wordplay=k vocab=tie Overall=Khaoz Theory |
Voted For: Daubs
daubs got this one, he was way more consistent with his disses, well only 3 bars, but he stayed consistent, and thats what you gotta do with a short battle like this, khaoz, your second bar was totally weak and shitless.......because who really cares if his phone was stolen, its a weak meta man.....hurt ya verse alot...and your closer was stretched and worded horribly.....but you got decent concepts, keep up fo-sho..daubs stayed pretty strong throught, nothing too special here.....i kinda chuckles at daubs' closer though, word......so daubs got this easily.....good show both v/daubs |
ok thanks man.. uppin.............................
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Voted For: Daubs
daubs came stronger here good punches hit on point good flow and your structure was perfect on this diff but dope wordplay was good and opener and closer went well kaos-first off u hated which is stated there is none of in tha rules....other than that flow was good came strong at tha end but weak at tha start structure was ok and wordplay was good just felt daubs punches landed better on ev ery bar |
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Voted For: Daubs
daubs: Puncture your lungs like a board with a dart.... Blowjob before the battle? Thats the only way you gonna have a head start!! ^^^DECENT OPENER...ITS NOT PLAYED BUT IJUST THINK HEAD BARS R OLD NOW.. This fools a coin so ima leave this hoe spun... Skippin over gats? Just proves to us.......that you jump the gun!! ^^^UHH OKAY PUNCH Not been KO'ed? Well ima have to make the first.. If ya girl was a sphere.. You still wouldn't manage to get a "round herr"!! ^^^FIRST & HERR...DONT RYHME I KNOW U PROBLY SPEAK WITH A ACCENT BUT DIS DONT RYHME 4REAL khaoz: ''UK Stand Up''...Be Counted, & Get Yo ''Arse'' Slain By Da Minority! U Culd Have Cartman Reppin England & Nobodiez ''Respectin Yo Authority'' ^^^VERY WEAK OPENER Sorry-Bee, Yo Rhymez R ''Evicted'' U Can Now Go Home It Aint Only Winz We Stealin Frum U, Itz Ya PHONE!!** ^^EVEN THO IT WAS A PERSONAL...I REALLY DIDN'T LIKE DIS Hand Daubs A ''Bone'' Diz Dawg Choked & Forgot 2 Chew Dat Diss 2 TBN, U Wuz Lame... Gave Uz A Bad Name, Cuz U Came Whacker Than They Krew! ^^^BEST LINE IN YA VERSE.. V/DAUBS...EVEN THO HE AINT HAVE NO PERSONALS I THINK HE HAD MORE CREATIVITY....WHICH KHAOZ REALLY DIDN'T HAVE NUN OF YA BARS STOOD OUT RETURN DA FAVOR.... |
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