Tonight (drop links) mixtape track
 

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/4/lennyblaze_music.htm

A Track Off My Mixtape, Drop Feedbacks and I WILL Return The Favor Shortly, Thanx

Tonight theres a party, the third strypez is invited
Shorty over there is who I might spend the night with
Shes a tight chick, she says that shes into me
The way she movin she got a lot of energy
She said lenny please come a lil closer
Theres something I really wanna show ya
We start from kisses and go a lil further
I aint a waiter but I know how to serve her
I reserved her now shes all mine
And I know she notices how im so fine
Im down anytime for boo’z or blunts
Aint leavin the party till the crew is crunk
Shit aint new to us we party every week
Stayin up all night aint getting any sleep
Pass the henessy, we chuggin all night
Everybody drunk and the bitches fuckin all night

Now about lenny blaze, I drink my liquor hard
And my crew in the back with spliff we spark
The chicks be large, in the ass and the chest
Me and her alone theres a fact that im blessed
Don’t have to impress, she knows im the shiet
Playas be jealous from the hoes that im with
Unzip my pants bitches blowin my dick
I can tell shes naughty from holdin that whip
I told her to strip, off goes her dress
Now shes dropping the top for her chest
A lotta action non stop till we sweat
So much amusement I forgot how we met
Hicky on ya neck, I know ya like that
That’s a bite for you, I know youll bite back
She got a nice ass, that blew me away
Been through so much and I only knew her today

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=192533
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193061

Honestly...........this is pretty much crap. There was absolutely no thought behind any of your words. I can rhyme words all day, it takes someone good to actually say something that's worth a damn :thumbup:™

returnin the favor:

im actually kinda feelin this man!
beat is sickk sampled
flow is dope
delivery fits the track
lyrics are nice
quality is coo, i can understand it
this track is pretty nice man!!

thanx a lot for the feedbacks, still waitin for akademik to hit my thread back, i left a link and his page

uppin, dont sleep

yo lyrics kinda simple and basic work on that but really good story tellin dawg.....quality is perfect and flowed perfect...lmao at the chipmunk sampling..sorry dawg but i have ta laugh at that ahit...i love when they put kayne like shit in songs...anyway this was pretty good...keep up the dope work...just make sure ta get more complex wit' ur vocab

http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193287
return the fav.....i aint on this i just DJ and mix shit..

beat is not bad,dont like the story and lyrics and all,nice multis,nice flow,nice quality,overall not bad man

Beat is dope, but ya lyrics are terrible elavte kid you need help

iight thanx yall ima work on the lyrics mostly, uppin

listening as itype.....

beat is dopeness yo....feelin it its sick.....turn ur vocals up a lil bit......lyrically this aint as bad as ppl b saying...there hardly complex but i like the stroytelling of them, its dope when ur listening to know he rest of the story...dman this beat is ill but turn it down a lil... i wouldnt say you should put this into ur mixtape unless u re-do wid some multis n a fw wittier lines n shit, but you and this track have mad potential man..keep droppin..:thumbup:

RTf: http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193240
http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193124

In all honest...wasn't feeling you. Beat is coo, but you = no. Lines is mediocre to wack to me my dude. And ya voice sounds...uhh...stop whining my nig. I really couldn't listen to this whole thing.
Ya qualities coo, flow was off at points but..ehh.
Overall, not feeling it dog.

Leave feed on Diamonds Freeverse. Holla.

u need to elevate fam...beat was dope but like pop lotty said u sounding like u were whining...lyrics were meh...flow seemed off a few times...i would re-do this before putting it onto my mixtape...practice and practice...keep droppin though fam

rtf on "I Just Gotta"

returned all favors and uppin for more

uppin, drop links everyone