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the_DukE 05-31-05 12:11 PM

BlOoDsHoTT vs the_DukE
 
Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting
No Beef... Battles are strictly words

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 05-31-05 at 12:41 PM

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System 05-31-05 12:12 PM

the_DukE has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-31-05 12:12 PM.

System 05-31-05 12:15 PM

BlOoDsHoTT has ACCEPTED this battle on 05-31-05 12:15 PM.

the_DukE 05-31-05 12:20 PM

this nigga made a mistake, thinkin he could battle me/
usually, i sell tickets, but imma merk yo ass for free//
spittin hollow tip rounds, send ya body to the earth/
when im through, imma make this nigga wanna go to church//
send out the search, cuz this niggaz gone missin/
my flow like mike jones, 4-4's im still tippin//
straight rippin, on the mic like you thought my name was grim/
you couldnt win this battle even if ya name was slim//
just admit it man, my flow is hot, it makes ya feel like dyin/
the only reason you bloodshot is cuz i sent ya home cryin//

the_DukE 05-31-05 12:21 PM

uppin for bloodshott.............

Recluse 05-31-05 12:40 PM

Ayo Duke........

Take Out Ya Brain Its No Use-Cuz Only Blood Gotta Lock On Dis Game...
Found Lame? Dis Joke Got His Name Off Of A E.S.P.N GAME!!!
Old Played Out Concepts No Wordplay Won't Make You Win Fo Shit...
Even Playing Boxing-The Duke Still Wouldn't Be An Offical WIN!!...(NamePlay)
People Like You Are The Reason RV Turns Bad...
Net Bums!..Ya Smell Bad..A Net Girl Friend Is All You'llEver Have...
People Clown You Just For The Way You Postin...
Now Imagine Walking The Streets?!?..Its Ok I GOT THE POTION!!...(LOL)
I'ma Give You What Most People Wish They Had In There Lids...
After Dis The Chances Of You Moving Is Like Wheel Bound Kids Doing FLIPS!!!......

Recluse 05-31-05 12:41 PM

Uppin............................

DQ 05-31-05 02:01 PM

Voted For: BlOoDsHoTT

BlOoDsHoTT:

Take Out Ya Brain Its No Use-Cuz Only Blood Gotta Lock On Dis Game...
Found Lame? Dis Joke Got His Name Off Of A E.S.P.N GAME!!!
^nice opener

Old Played Out Concepts No Wordplay Won't Make You Win Fo Shit...
Even Playing Boxing-The Duke Still Wouldn't Be An Offical WIN!!...(NamePlay)
^funny nameplay right there

People Like You Are The Reason RV Turns Bad...
Net Bums!..Ya Smell Bad..A Net Girl Friend Is All You'llEver Have...
^kinda basic but still punch though

People Clown You Just For The Way You Postin...
Now Imagine Walking The Streets?!?..Its Ok I GOT THE POTION!!...(LOL)
^hehe coo bar

I'ma Give You What Most People Wish They Had In There Lids...
After Dis The Chances Of You Moving Is Like Wheel Bound Kids Doing FLIPS!!!......
^haha nice wordplay in ya closer

Overall good battle, had some nice punches, some were kinda played but they still hit though. Some personal touches here and there which gave battle extra sumthing. Vocab was coo as well as flow n structure, just a solid drop...

the_DukE:

this nigga made a mistake, thinkin he could battle me/
usually, i sell tickets, but imma merk yo ass for free//
^okay opener

spittin hollow tip rounds, send ya body to the earth/
when im through, imma make this nigga wanna go to church//
^kinda self-glorification right here

send out the search, cuz this niggaz gone missin/
my flow like mike jones, 4-4's im still tippin//
^same as previous bar...

straight rippin, on the mic like you thought my name was grim/
you couldnt win this battle even if ya name was slim//
^coo lines

just admit it man, my flow is hot, it makes ya feel like dyin/
the only reason you bloodshot is cuz i sent ya home cryin//
^best line is ya closer for sure

Aight battle, downside of ya verse be the self-glorification though, try to focus more on opponent than on yaself next time you kno (no hate btw). Flow was good though, feeling ya vocab and structure. Last line was dope bar, got some punches in there that worked out well...just try to stay more consistent with em next time aight...

Recluse 05-31-05 02:30 PM

uppin............................................. .

Recluse 06-01-05 12:35 PM

Uppin............................................. ...

Recluse 06-01-05 10:05 PM

Uppin For More Votes..............................

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morse code 06-03-05 12:13 PM

Voted For: BlOoDsHoTT

Take Out Ya Brain Its No Use-Cuz Only Blood Gotta Lock On Dis Game...
Found Lame? Dis Joke Got His Name Off Of A E.S.P.N GAME!!!
8/10...good shit, nice opener
Old Played Out Concepts No Wordplay Won't Make You Win Fo Shit...
Even Playing Boxing-The Duke Still Wouldn't Be An Offical WIN!!...(NamePlay)
7/10....decent
People Like You Are The Reason RV Turns Bad...
Net Bums!..Ya Smell Bad..A Net Girl Friend Is All You'llEver Have...
6/10...eehh
People Clown You Just For The Way You Postin...
Now Imagine Walking The Streets?!?..Its Ok I GOT THE POTION!!...(LOL)
7/10....lol, decent
I'ma Give You What Most People Wish They Had In There Lids...
After Dis The Chances Of You Moving Is Like Wheel Bound Kids Doing FLIPS!!!......
8/10...lol, nice closer too

36/50
decent verse some okay lines some good but nothing was majorly played or anything....good werdplay and punches good closer and opener decent multiews also


this nigga made a mistake, thinkin he could battle me/
usually, i sell tickets, but imma merk yo ass for free//
5/10...whack!
spittin hollow tip rounds, send ya body to the earth/
when im through, imma make this nigga wanna go to church//
4/10...OMG, not good at all, coodve been good thoguh
send out the search, cuz this niggaz gone missin/
my flow like mike jones, 4-4's im still tippin//
2/10........WTF, how bout a NO
straight rippin, on the mic like you thought my name was grim/
you couldnt win this battle even if ya name was slim//
5/10...a little decent still pretty gayt hough
just admit it man, my flow is hot, it makes ya feel like dyin/
the only reason you bloodshot is cuz i sent ya home cryin//
5/10...eehh
21/50
this versea was terible, sry but thats just my honest oppinion, you need to definitly work on your punches and werdplay and well, just about everything...keep elevating though

v/twizted.


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