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Elementality Vs. Spoken Word is Bond
Battles up Monday - Check In by Wednesday - Drop by Friday - Votes by Sunday
No line limit and the battler with most votes by Sunday night is the winner. If this is a topical battle, write a topical and not a poetic drop and the same is vice a versa. All Battlers must vote on 4 other battles and leave their voting links in their battle thread. Battles voted on may be from either poetry or topical battles. If vote threads aren't in your poetry battle thread by sunday you will suffer a loss by Disqualification. Extensions must be asked for by Thursday night by pming any of the mods (Acuity, Drama Queen & Elementality). No extensions will be given 4 if asked 4 on Friday night. Extensions are only given till Sunday night at the most. If you dont ask for an extention, and drop whenever you feel like it you will be Disqualified. Do not abuse extentions, they are not to be used if you're just too lazy to drop within the confines of the circumstances. Leave reasonable explanation for your absense. If the League notices you are a slacker due to this nature you will be banned for being out-right slothfully callous. Every battler must nominate (not their own) one topical and poetry battle for pieces of the week, in the main forum . People with pieces of the week shall have their drops stickied and placed in the Pieces Of Inspiration sub forum Don't ho-show because you will be banned if you do it twice. We can understand you cannot drop due to certain circumstances but if this happens a second time, you're banned from the league for 2 weeks. If you signed up for both leagues and you no-show in one league twice, you will be banned in both leagues! Try to limit the freeposts, we will have a chat/beef thread for that. Also give fully explained votes, if not your votes won't count! Topic: Illusion of Friendship |
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The Illusion of Friendship Trip as i go out of my way for you Lag behind just so you can get ahead Fall as do everything for you into nothing All just my effort to be a good friend Whatch me as i drown in your neglection Whatch me as i decay in your ignorance You're a shapeshifter, changing forms transforming from aquiantance to stranger You're just a pigment of my imagination Where're you now when I need you most? Drowning in this quicksand time glass Your true form is clear as i look outwards The essence of friendship is just an illusion. |
Even though Spoken Word Bond no showed, I'm still going to say somethin about your poem...
That was raw, even though it was short, but it had alot of stuff in it. The emotion was good dawg, you showed your feelings of how you felt when your friend wasn't even a friend to you. The imaginary was nice, picture very perfect. The approach you took was good also, and the concept you put down was good. I only just wish you can write more. Can you please return a favor...Leave a feedback in my newest OM "The monster Within"....thanx |
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You only just wish I could write more? what do you mean? I think you have this ideology that quantity is better than quantity. I wrote 3 stanzas only because thats all I needed to get my point across about this topic at hand. To me, I think poetry is best when you can use a language to the point where you can explain your thoughts and emotions with style and without having to tell your life story. Picture a book summary if you can't grasp what Im telling you. |
Closed due to opponent not checking in
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