Kein Witz vs Dizzee Rascal
 

Battle Rules:

6 - UNLIMITED Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting

Minimum posts to vote: 20

Check in by: 06-04-05 at 05:24 PM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

Kein Witz has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-05 05:26 PM.

Dizzee Rascal has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-01-05 05:31 PM.

Okay, quick one.

It's like your wearing turtlenecks, the way my shells surround your head.
Even if Dizzee's was a cheerleader, he still couldn't "Bring It On" in bed.

Alright, seriously....

Come on, you can't even get in-line, like your school's cafeteria is closed. *
Growing roses is the one and only time this stupid fool has got hoes(hose).
Dizzee Rascal couldn't raise the roof....if he was fucking Hurricane Francis.
Just like Rascal was playing monopoly, Dizzee is taking his chances. **
You've passed your prime, wasted my time, you're wack --- face it, son.
My true skills are now awake...yours are just being placed in one.
Nobody likes you, your worthless, can only buy girls on payday.
Love is blind...... but she still wouldn't want to look at you, anyway.

* http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193246
** In monopoly, you take a chance card when landing on the question mark...

Don't get the rest, don't bother to vote.

Ok i said 8 lines in that pm i sent you so i hope you dropped 8.

Nobody to save ya, please quit rap do the whole site a favour
Im ya saviour, but ive seen better whole/hole punches on the margin of a paper..(oh shit!)
Give this cat a fright, ima nozzle my glocks just to watch my attack spray
Claim to be tight, but my knifes in ya spine leave witz-un-tied/whitsuntied consider it a holy-day/holiday
Charging, as like books in africa ur knowledge is starving
Im barging, paper cut ur eye lids so you see im winning by a margin
Wont be found, when my fists 'charge' ur face a brutal pound!
Can't make a sound, put a gun fru einsteins brain to leave 'witz' splattered on the ground

Wait since u dropped an extra bar let me drop 1 quickly man so its even ight?

Bitch backing down in fear, like fertiliser experts, ive been slaying herbs for years
Make u disappear, dent a 2X4 in ur head, atleast it will expand ur ideas

...You do know 'years' and 'ideas' doesn't rhyme, right? o_O Anyway, okay. Good luck.

The syllable count doesnt but. for years and ideas have same syllable count and ends rhyme
Just thought i would neutralise that subtle attempt at swaying lol G'luck 2 u man

Yeah, nice drop. =| My record sucks. I usually stick with topicals and leagues.

Voted For: Kein Witz


Dizzee Rascal:

Nobody to save ya, please quit rap do the whole site a favour
Im ya saviour, but ive seen better whole/hole punches on the margin of a paper..(oh shit!)

Nice...8/10

Give this cat a fright, ima nozzle my glocks just to watch my attack spray
Claim to be tight, but my knifes in ya spine leave witz-un-tied/whitsuntied consider it a holy-day/holiday

Ok...5/10

Charging, as like books in africa ur knowledge is starving
Im barging, paper cut ur eye lids so you see im winning by a margin

Nice...8/10

Wont be found, when my fists 'charge' ur face a brutal pound!
Can't make a sound, put a gun fru einsteins brain to leave 'witz' splattered on the ground

LOL...A bit stretched, but nice...8/10

Overall: 29/40 (73%)

Kein Witz

It's like your wearing turtlenecks, the way my shells surround your head.
Even if Dizzee's was a cheerleader, he still couldn't "Bring It On" in bed.

Played...4/10

Come on, you can't even get in-line, like your school's cafeteria is closed. *
Growing roses is the one and only time this stupid fool has got hoes(hose).

Played...3/10

Dizzee Rascal couldn't raise the roof....if he was fucking Hurricane Francis.
Just like Rascal was playing monopoly, Dizzee is taking his chances. **

Decent...5/10

You've passed your prime, wasted my time, you're wack --- face it, son.
My true skills are now awake...yours are just being placed in one.

LOL nice...9/10

Nobody likes you, your worthless, can only buy girls on payday.
Love is blind...... but she still wouldn't want to look at you, anyway.

Coulda been worded better...6/10

Overall: 27/50 (54%)

This vote goes to Dizzee for not coming so played with his lines...Kein, work on your creativity man

No hate

Removed.. unexplained

Shit, my bad, meant to vote for Dizzee Rascal...Get that shit switched!

Lmao i did that in keins topical just a minute ago understandable mistake, you know how i would switch it?

Go post this link in the "battle problems" forum under community complaints and tell them that I meant to vote for you...They will switch it

Sleeepers ive voted on enough stuff................

Voted For: Kein Witz

Kein Witz- UH dawg....Your punches was played, and they were whack,non effective. The way you worded your set up punch, was whack also. The flow was alright in most parts, the best aspect of your verse was just the flow and the only good punch you had was...........

Dizzee Rascal couldn't raise the roof....if he was fucking Hurricane Francis.
Just like Rascal was playing monopoly, Dizzee is taking his chances. **

But everything else was BLAH!



Dizz- uh dawg. That was whack, no punches, no flow. Actually your whole verse was just plain nothing, you need to elevate on structure and flow........also punches. This was just plain whack, yo elevate.

Overall=This battle was whack, both heads needs to work on punches.......and personals with decent flow. Uh my vote goes to Kein Wtiz, He actually had a punch, most of them was played out..just plain blah! Dizz you came pure whackness man your punches wasn't even touching, sorry but you need to elevate.