devils gon' git ya [ part one ]
 

devils grip, as i slip
to the abyss of no return
many have attempted
they all suffer and burn
in the grip of hades
hand gripped on bone
of ya skeletal remains
poor kids aint comin home
if you commit sinful acts
thou shoul suffer eternity
dont worry im there
so you can fuckin burn wit me
i done wrong in life
death was my escape
climb the ladder to the heavens
and fell to the earth, geuss its fate
live life wit tha hand i was delt
gambled my soul and went all in
million to one odds
that i would not win
i was expected to fail
since my day of birth
april 12 9-zero
15 years of fuckin hurt
grit my teeth and kept goin
kept flowin, came out swingin
left cats runnin
seen the dogs im bringin
some sinful fuckin kids
wit knives in the pocket
so shut ya fuckin mouth
and ill come by and lock it

[ watch out for the devil ]
[ watch out for the flame ]
[ devils gon get ya ]
[ hear him callin out yo name ]

[ watch out for the devil ]
[ watch out for the flame ]
[ devils gon get ya ]
[ hear him callin out yo name ]

see the fires eyes
burnin thru tha clouds
leavin kids in tombs
wrapped like jesus in shrouds
wit tha holy book
recited at they graves
what the fuck good is that?
its a lil too late to save
what couldnt be saved
so let it be, and let it go
whats done is done
his soul belongs to the devo [devil]
tryna avoid death
take the leap of faith
but when ya legs get crushed
learn to walk on ya waist
wit every breath
i come closer to the end
so ima stop breathin
and accept the boatman as my friend
give him tokens in two
and hell take me away
dont wanna go but i must
cant take another day
end it now and be done
get this shit over with
you couldnt kill me if you tried
dont matta who you rollin with
theres no life in my body
no bite in my bark
no light in the tunnel
im stuck in the dark

[ watch out for the devil ]
[ watch out for the flame ]
[ devils gon get ya ]
[ hear him callin out yo name ]

[ watch out for the devil ]
[ watch out for the flame ]
[ devils gon get ya ]
[ hear him callin out yo name ]

[ watch out for the devil ]
[ watch out for the flame ]
[ devils gon get ya ]
[ hear him callin out yo name ]

ok my people let the feed begin....................

I hope you leave feed for all the OM's you posted. You do know each OM posted requires a link where you left feed right?

of course i did... im gettin right on that ...........................................

uppin............................................. .

yo mayne this was hott fiya mayne i like the speed and it would go good to a beat....deff. a good open mic not that great of vocab but i know u can use it well.......so just look out for that keep elevatin ur gettin betta 7/10 peace

upppin this shit...................................

Hey man, liked the flow and imagery was pretty good. Didn't really like the negativity and the thinkin that there is no hope, because there is, for everyone. But other than that it was a good piece. Keep it up.

yo man, i know theres hope but writin bout hell is alot more intriguin than heaven.. uppin this shit mannn