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Dervla 06-02-05 06:53 AM

Young Blaze vs White Powder
 
Battle Rules:

10-Lines
No Crew Votes
No Recycling
No Biting


6FT VS PSA.............G-luck.




Minimum posts to vote: 200

Check in by: 06-05-05 at 06:53 AM

Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in.

C.March 06-02-05 07:12 AM

good luck..... .......................

System 06-02-05 09:58 AM

White Powder has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-02-05 09:58 AM.

C.March 06-02-05 09:59 AM

Yo young, good luck on this battle man... never battled you b4.. soo yeh ill drop next class...

C.March 06-02-05 11:07 AM

Young….
Straight off the top……………………..
you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence...
Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance..
Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments...
Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments...
I’m ill see; you are a “waste of lines”, no wonder my rhymes will “trash” you..
Bash you? even my “keyboard functions” attack as their known to “slash (/)” you..
Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already...
4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..**
Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry..
Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.***

** = flatline… aka steady tone…
*** = three stooges.. aka 6 feet (Cali = Moe, Diabolic = Curly…Young = Larry) basically text, audio, and topical just picked the other 2, Leader & Co-leader of the crew…no hate.. just a line..

System 06-02-05 11:20 AM

Young Blaze has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-02-05 11:20 AM.

Ryan Hughes 06-02-05 02:01 PM

Ight Check.....


Get Bagged n Diced & Young Palm The Six U Seenin It Spray
Cuz U Culdnt' “Blaze A Scene” With Arsonist At Theater Plays
U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows
Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes
U Like the Breeze aint no effect....Ya styles weak, u cant See Me G
Cuz im "Givin U The L, P" like handing out Free Cd's
U as Hot as Useless Cookers I Stay wid Beef like Jewish Butchers
Shots Draw Red I'll Blow Ya Brains On the Roof like Toothless Hookers
Hyped From Ya Crew I aint gotta Write Fa U cuz me bein Nice is True
Bullets leave "WR On The Bench" like Jerry Rice Wit The Flu...
(W)hite Powde(R)
^^^sit.......back on Psa Bench.

Dervla 06-02-05 02:30 PM

This was feedback posted for White Powder
 
Uppin for some votes................................

Dizzee Rascal 06-02-05 02:32 PM

This was feedback posted for White Powder
 
*Leaves detailed feed for both since it wont let me vote*

you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence...
Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance..

Bit of filler really an ok way to open

Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments...
Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments...

Safe

I’m ill see; you are a “waste of lines”, no wonder my rhymes will “trash” you..
Bash you? even my “keyboard functions” attack as their known to “slash (/)” you..

Nice rhyme scheme was poor on account of you n you but who carse, the punch hit

Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already...
4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..**

Nice

Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry..
Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.***

Nice personal

VS

Get Bagged n Diced & Young Palm The Six U Seenin It Spray
Cuz U Culdnt' “Blaze A Scene” With Arsonist At Theater Plays

Nice

U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows
Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes

Decent needed re-wording though

U Like the Breeze aint no effect....Ya styles weak, u cant See Me G
Cuz im "Givin U The L, P" like handing out Free Cd's

Dope

U as Hot as Useless Cookers I Stay wid Beef like Jewish Butchers
Shots Draw Red I'll Blow Ya Brains On the Roof like Toothless Hookers

meh

Hyped From Ya Crew I aint gotta Write Fa U cuz me bein Nice is True
Bullets leave "WR On The Bench" like Jerry Rice Wit The Flu...

^^ This is waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaay to forced you cant just take two random letters from his name and use it for a personal this was wack

Hard to vote, Blaze definetly had the nicest punch of the battle but the last two bars, just fell of where has WP was consistant fru out which won it for him
Please return the unbiased favour on the battle in my sig plllease

Dervla 06-02-05 02:33 PM

HOLY FUCK I SHOULD PUT THIS IN 100 POST!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ahhhhhh w.e. uppin for some votes.

C.March 06-02-05 02:54 PM

good battle blaze..... good luck.. ......

Daubs 06-02-05 04:24 PM

Voted For: Young Blaze

Get Bagged n Diced & Young Palm The Six U Seenin It Spray
Cuz U Culdnt' “Blaze A Scene” With Arsonist At Theater Plays

NICE OPENER AND WORDPLAY...

U Got in Psa But all crews the Door is Closed witcha Borin Flows
Closest ud get to ex-perties is if u'd "export-tees" like Foreign Clothes

MEH, WAS OK.


U Like the Breeze aint no effect....Ya styles weak, u cant See Me G
Cuz im "Givin U The L, P" like handing out Free Cd's

BEST PUNCH, NICE WORDPLAY AND NAMEPLAY...

U as Hot as Useless Cookers I Stay wid Beef like Jewish Butchers
Shots Draw Red I'll Blow Ya Brains On the Roof like Toothless Hookers

WAS OK....

Hyped From Ya Crew I aint gotta Write Fa U cuz me bein Nice is True
Bullets leave "WR On The Bench" like Jerry Rice Wit The Flu...

NICE CLOSER....

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you’ve been outdone.. my flows will last n blast and surpass your intelligence...
Save yourself the embarrassment kid, cuz...your lines just have no relevance..

NOT HARD HITTING, BUT OK OPENER...

Stand a Chance? No.. I wont be hesitant to attack and break u down like sediments...
Battlin me? Blaze you should have delayed ur actions like speech impediments...

NICE PUNCH, GOOD WORDPLAY.

I’m ill see; you are a “waste of lines”, no wonder my rhymes will “trash” you..
Bash you? even my “keyboard functions” attack as their known to “slash (/)” you..

NICE CONCEPT, BUT I DONT THINK YOU WORDED IT TO PERFECTION.

Blast you? Nah kid I’ll just assault u verbally so this herb will see I beat u already...
4-4 to the head you know he’s dead cuz it’s the only time yah keep a beat steady..**

NICE PERSONAL PUNCH...

Kid your not ready.. you couldn’t bear weight.. cuz its to heavy for this herb to carry..
Kids a “stooge”. 6-feet. got “curly and moe”. yo young...u fit in perfect as “larry”,.***

NOT FEELIN IT REALLY

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

YOUNG GETS MAH VOTE AS HE HAD THE HARDER HITTIN PUNCHES AND WAS MORE CONSISTANT THROUGHOUT, BOTH HAD DECENT WORDPLAY AND NICE FLOW THROUGHOUT.

NO HATE,
RTF BLAZE.

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

C.March 06-02-05 06:37 PM

rightttt... uppin.....

C.March 06-02-05 06:39 PM

edit.... dizzie and daubs have the same IP..... wow... dunno if they the same person.. but one said i would have won.. and the other said young won....

Daubs 06-02-05 07:41 PM

we not same person...........

we in same crew, both live in manchester with same internet provider...


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