morse code vs .barz of steel.
 

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Check in by: 06-03-05 at 05:11 PM

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.Barz Of Steel. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-02-05 09:25 PM.

Look...

Ya rhymes is weak, please, don't try and fight with me
I'll throw ya "face to the curb", make you "bite the streets"
I like to beef, My nine'll close his eyes with ease
Or I'll clap five, in this wack guy, til his ass lies deceased
Look kid, all ya shit is played....................................
because the only time you dealing with "heavy barz"
...............................................is when u "liftin weights"
Ya text is weak, quit testin me, you're better? Please....
I stay "above u".....................................like the "letter T"
So I doubt you will win, I'm sorry to have to clown on this kid
But this dude's 14 years old and still sounds like he's 10!!!!!!! *
You're clashin with hell, I'll 'tear your ass' like 'bein smacked w/ a belt
Plus the "only time you could get a win is if you battle yourself! *
This kid's a bitch, everything you create with a pen is shit
Come on man, I've seen better "(w)rappers" on "Christmas gifts"
I'm sick with rhymes, so kid, you can't win this fight...........
Because ya "style has been played ever since your inventor died!!!" **



* click music and the first song...It's called "We Do What"

** Immortality is his alias

*** Samuel Morse invented the morse code and now he is dead...

.................................................. im postin tomorrow sumtime

morse code has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-03-05 12:30 PM.

ALL PERSONALS ARE REAL(i know him in real life)....

this cats so wack that he had to cook stu and use black magik
to create barz of steel because he never before had em *1
you think you 'raw'? then im choppin you up like my names 'butch'
my verses are on 'fire' ! your 'godly' ?....................
......well if i sat you on my notepad id bet weed see a 'burning bush' *2

im 'burning this fag' like a straight 'cooking piece of cake'
'barz of steel' with the 'blueprint' shit he 'aint got it made' *3
like owning 'a scarce penny' steel must not have 'common sense'
stepping to me with that? your crap admit it..............
...................even gave yourself credit to boost your confidence *4

im not hell raiser but yet i use pens (pins) to raise hell
its a shame he became 'barz of steel' just to have 'cells' (sales)
your 'flows about to be killed' cuz this is 'the last straw'
could never be 'raisin' chaos at all........
......like the attempts to lift a 'breast from grandmas' *5

this dude is 'shit' so stop 'sitting' around cuz im 'sending him in'
battlin his alias's is the only time he can get a win
hes astounded by my talent i got him branded with a loss for words *6
homie only has 'fake steel' and how you black magik...........
..........when you whiter than a jackson accident gon worse *7

http://tinypic.com/5ma1rl


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1*his alias's=black~magik, stu, microcker

2*get it heez a pussy....BUSH....lol (the burning bush is a stroy from the bible in case you didnt know)

3*barz of steel=not made yet, blueprint=not made yet, cooking piece of cake=not made yet

4*posts 26 and 27

5*you get the raise a breast part (hopefully), but also their breasts are soggy like RAISINS

6*yes the link actually is HIS audio (hi fi may not work YET, not sure)

7*(YES it IS him) he has a fake chain=fake steel(name play)


CHECK ALL LINKS OR DO NOT VOTE!!!

LMAO...fake ass personals

You dont know me kid

lol

^okay...sure^

thats y

1. you got the same yahoo as black magiks old one
2. your ip, and stu (blacks other alias) are the same
3. you up every thread black ups
4. you woodnt talk to me on aim

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

this cats so wack that he had to cook stu and use black magik
to create barz of steel because he never before had em *1

Ok personal

you think you 'raw'? then im choppin you up like my names 'butch'
my verses are on 'fire' ! your 'godly' ?....................
......well if i sat you on my notepad id bet weed see a 'burning bush' *2

Decent

im 'burning this fag' like a straight 'cooking piece of cake'
'barz of steel' with the 'blueprint' shit he 'aint got it made' *3


Nice

like owning 'a scarce penny' steel must not have 'common sense'
stepping to me with that? your crap admit it..............
...................even gave yourself credit to boost your confidence *4

Ok

im not hell raiser but yet i use pens (pins) to raise hell
its a shame he became 'barz of steel' just to have 'cells' (sales)

Bit forced decent

your 'flows about to be killed' cuz this is 'the last straw'
could never be 'raisin' chaos at all........
......like the attempts to lift a 'breast from grandmas' *5

lollololol

this dude is 'shit' so stop 'sitting' around cuz im 'sending him in'
battlin his alias's is the only time he can get a win

Str8

hes astounded by my talent i got him branded with a loss for words *6
homie only has 'fake steel' and how you black magik...........
..........when you whiter than a jackson accident gon worse *7

Theres nothing wrong with being white uve even got a white man in ur sig


VS


Ya rhymes is weak, please, don't try and fight with me
I'll throw ya "face to the curb", make you "bite the streets"

Sure i said this in a cypher lol nice

I like to beef, My nine'll close his eyes with ease
Or I'll clap five, in this wack guy, til his ass lies deceased

Filler

Look kid, all ya shit is played....................................
because the only time you dealing with "heavy barz"
...............................................is when u "liftin weights"

Str8

Ya text is weak, quit testin me, you're better? Please....
I stay "above u".....................................like the "letter T"

PLLLAYED

So I doubt you will win, I'm sorry to have to clown on this kid
But this dude's 14 years old and still sounds like he's 10!!!!!!! *

Ok personal

You're clashin with hell, I'll 'tear your ass' like 'bein smacked w/ a belt
Plus the "only time you could get a win is if you battle yourself! *

erm str8 sure he sed same ting

This kid's a bitch, everything you create with a pen is shit
Come on man, I've seen better "(w)rappers" on "Christmas gifts"

Played

I'm sick with rhymes, so kid, you can't win this fight...........
Because ya "style has been played ever since your inventor died!!!" **

Tight

Punches = BoS
Personals - Both
Metaphors/similes = Both
Flow = BoS
Amusement = both

Overall = BoS

Please return the favour in my sig

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

This was feedback posted for morse code
 

Checking the polls......................GOOD SHIT MORESE !

morse_code_09: http://community.rapverse.com/showb...194126&posted=1 lol, look at yur ppic
black~magik : lol, yeah the jokes on you
black~magik : its not me
morse_code_09: haha, too bad this isnt sick ass barz id name fag, this is the flowin phantom name, damn youve just been caught
black~magik : what?
morse_code_09: and if your really not black magik then get me banned for fake personals, i beg you
morse_code_09: i dont really give a fuck bout rv anymore
black~magik : what r u talkin bout, this is me
morse_code_09: im not even joking ask strobe to ban me, just do it
black~magik : why u postin my pic wtf?
black~magik : i wasnt talkin to u some chik is buggin me

........caught in your own tracks homo

Voted For: .Barz Of Steel.

his name should be whores ho

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation.

Yo please can u return the favour people ??????????

Already voted on the battle in your sig...

Voters, please do not be fooled by this kids fake personals

Uppin

LOL at you getting the first vote removed...What a bitch