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Twizted. vs Denied Truth
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6 - UNLIMITED Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting Minimum posts to vote: 20 Check in by: 06-05-05 at 08:38 PM Must drop verse in 4320 minutes after check in. |
Denied Truth has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-02-05 10:37 PM.
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he set it up and didn't even show... Well iight Den.. Latez |
Nevermind he dont have to check in untill tomorrow..my fault.. |
Twizted. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-05-05 06:28 PM.
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Twizted. has ACCEPTED this battle on 06-05-05 06:32 PM.
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Nigga you not wreckin-on-lines, that's deception-on-minds Get A Mirror Image Of Ya Rhymes, That's "reflection-on- crimes" Cuz Wen U Drop Alot Its Like "Mass Murder" Erybody Get Hurt.. Principles On Why U Choose TO Bruise Eyes N Earz Remain Covert.. Disperse Ya Rhymes Simply Like 12 Yr Oles At Liquor Stores..Dey UnderAge Drops In Other Words Dey Are Lyrically Underdeveloped...No One Wit Skillz Wanna Cop |
dropped wack cuz i fink he gwan no show... makes it easier on me... Chea..i know its weak... Church |
[center]Ayo Denied Truth
You Winning Dis Battle Is Like Canadians Winning Ova U.S... Its Impossible Cuz Only People Who "Deny The Truth" Wear a Vest!... Your a Newbie-People Don't Put There Time Into You Hoes... But If You Don't Stop Lieing-I Think Somethings Gonna Grow To Ya NOSE!!!(Sig) You Capable Of Nothin So Deztructive-Just Water Gun Gats... Theres Only One Thing Dats Shine-ing On You-And Dats Whats Ya avy HAD!!!..(avy) I'll Break You Down-Rip Ya Arm Outta Ya Socket-Just To See Ya Cry... Den Set Fire To Ya House-Den "Deny The Truth" After You Can Ask Me WHY!... I Hope You Learned Ya Lesson-Cuz Theres No More We Can Re-hurse... I Just Gave You Gore To And Ko And I Freestyled My VERSE!!!... Blah |
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This was feedback posted for Denied Truth
Chekin Pollz......................................Nice Verse MA!
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Voted For: Twizted.
v/ Twizted BreakDown... Punches: Twizted (Denied Had None) Personals: Twizted (Got On Her Sig & Avy) Creativity: Denied (Liked Her Use Of Words) Multiples: Neither (Denied Had Some Not Alot Tho) Structure: Neither (Both Was Horrible & Off) Wordplay: Denied (Throughout Her Whole Verse) Vocab: Neither (Not Really Good On Both Sides) Nameplay: Twizted (Used ALOT) Open Lines: Twizted Middle Lines: Twizted Endin Lines: Twizted (Best Line Was Ya Closer) WHY? - Twizted Basically Dissed Her, Shorite Didnt Diss Him...Was Just Sorta Flowin Usin Wordplay, Not Ne Thing Directly At Him... RTF!!! Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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Voted For: Denied Truth
Yo this was an ok battle. i think both of you did well. but i think denied truth had the best verse. i thought his structure was easier to read and therefore made for a better flow. He had better punchlines and stayed consistent with his verse in terms of quality of content. He focused on quality over quantity meanin he concentrated on getting his verse tight rather than having a longer verse. My favourite line in this battle was: "Nigga you not wreckin-on-lines, that's deception-on-minds Get A Mirror Image Of Ya Rhymes, That's "reflection-on- crimes"" because i thought the rhyme structure was nice and the vocab was at a higher level. "Disperse Ya Rhymes Simply Like 12 Yr Oles At Liquor Stores..Dey UnderAge Drops In Other Words Dey Are Lyrically Underdeveloped...No One Wit Skillz Wanna Cop" I thought that closer was nice for real, with one final insult to leave him with. I generally wasn't feelin Twisted verse as muc. Ain't nothin personal. Don't get me wrong i thought his verse was ok. i just prefered Denied Truth's verse. Peace Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. |
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