Artisticamente r u fucking illiterate?
 

Nobody to save ya, please quit rap do the whole site a favour
Im ya saviour, but ive seen better whole/hole punches on the margin of a paper..(oh shit!)
Give this cat a fright, ima nozzle my glocks just to watch my attack spray
Claim to be tight, but my knifes in ya spine leave witz-un-tied/whitsuntied consider it a holy-day/holiday
Charging, as like books in africa ur knowledge is starving
Im barging, paper cut ur eye lids so you see im winning by a margin
Wont be found, when my fists 'charge' ur face a brutal pound!
Can't make a sound, put a gun fru einsteins brain to leave 'witz' splattered on the ground


Ok from that verse ur saying there are no punches and theres no flow
and to elevate
I think U need to elevate
Quite obviously flow there if u fucking read it
No punches !! hahahaa r u stupid u just dont understand them calling me wack wtdf? i would fucking own u iv seen ur shit u fucking newbie
Dont lyk bitchin but u dum a fuck

Dude You Suck!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!

to be honest dizzie your structure needs some work and thats whats affecting your flow.......

beef thread yes...but better off perhaps in O/M...

...oh you ain't Dizzee...change ya name be yourself not someone else...Stan

^^ Thank You Mizz Fyre I Love You Hun.........................

just telling dizzee bout how he can improve..........

^^ THen why you trying to battle me?.............................

^^^what d'ya mean why.........?

Well Far As Your verse goes

The only thing really Wrong with your verse Is Your Structure ....But That Doesnt make anybody wack Always Do your bars like This If possible \/

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^ Thats Sloppy Structure

Hope you Use the advice

^^^true i don't think you're WACK at all..........work on your structure....come wit more complex punches and you'll be good...........

^^ Well shit i say he's WHACK..................and stanza you said you wanted to battle me right?.......


GET @ ME ON PM............

BULLSHIT HA HA!!! Structure Haz NOTHIN 2 Do Widda Flow @all Foo'z :shoot:

structure=[da way u prezent da rhymes, & da cleaner ur structure da more complex it looks]

Flow=Da Wording ov verses!!!!!!!!!!!!!

^^^what d'ya mean flow comes from the wording of verses................

^^.................................*smh* @ kHAOZ....................

^^^lol i don't agree with anything that he said.........