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Spiritual Depravation - By Stanza
Spirititual Depravation As The wind blows against the windows of my Sad soul The Thoughts of deprevation begins to take control Debasing My Mind & Tearing Down my bodily Features Thought this was only in my spirit but it has its on creature My Spirits being so spoken bad of in so many ways I figure that I Should Just Give up now and end my days My days on This Earth That Have me So Depressed Repressed and So Undedicated to Lifes Many Test So My Soul Sits in Deprevation as the Mockery Still Taunts on My Head Hung Down In Sadness as I Pull The Clip out of my Gun Then It all comes back to me ....My Life Isnt All About Easy Street Because Even In Life A Spirititaul Depravation Can Have You Beat Please Leave Some Feed Favors will be Returned |
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Homie Nice Shyt EVEN if it was SHORT!but i like!everything was on point!VOCAB was FCKn there!wordplay was perfect!what more can i say Homie!say RTF in ma Freestyle OM below in my SIG!(da Link)
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Thanx mayne ..........Im RTF Rii Now ......................
still uppin |
Thanx HOMIE!holla atcha boy!...................................
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Oh Yeah Your very welcome lOL
Still Uppin ...... |
Stan doing big...am feelin the compexity of the contend , u had nice imagery ....lacked on emotions but try to add transitions....to make it smoothen out
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My delivery is bold and bitterly cold like ice type nice
With computers, expect compensation for direct conversation Online with strong crime minds some cats reject this domination I bring to the table this thing is able to educate like college classrooms My task blooms like flowers my tune powers like concerts my past doomed Doe, my level is true give the devil his due In this rap system try yap wisdom, trap rhythm and utilize rhymes With a wise mind and deliver rugged toughness in the confines Of other cat’s brain// Dissipate heat on microphones, twist the fate of street domes, while These below average rapper hate at home why you smile? |
LOL Thanx DV
MADDRAPPER WTF are you doin this aint this place for your wack ass freestyles GTFO Still uppin |
Good shit mayne....nice imagery...good flow...good structure cant be mad at this ya feel me 7/10 RTF...link in sig
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Thanx mayne ......................uppin ........................
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Thanx mayne ......................uppin ........................
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