"Story of An Ugly Duckling" ft. Triple_N
 

aiight, since Seven got me unbanned from that dumb fuck Doomsday's gayness, I'ma post this track again. Yea, it's old, but it's best track of mine to date. Some diss to this ugly ass hoe at my school i ain't like who madd annoyin'. Trip on hook and intro.

www.myspace.com/spul or www.soundclick.com/spulakareckless


http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=193731
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I like DOOMSDAY!!!!!!!!!!!, I think if only we had had a chance to get to know each other, perhaps have a drink, then maybe our friendship could have blossomed sooner. :)

Intro- was funny as fuck "Slap the hoe.."

Chorus-..lol Triple Nizzle...."Disgusting fat bugaboo as bitch" always coming nice wit it foo

S-..nice presence...u did ya thang am feelin it..haha, "little bitch ran away" but spuly ripped it. "ooh the bitch got a dick" kinda...lol strange..is she transexual..lol?

^nah, she jus an ugly hoe who think she so fine. :nonono: upppp...........

lmao good track flows was good i liked tha track came at it witta diff concept bein original trip held it down to fa shos...=1=

drop the beef. I will strike you. Iight, I really didn't like the beat- that shit was just the same for too long... i like how you hooked up the hook but it was eminemish as fuck- your intro was real funny, lyrics and shit were so,so all in all it was iight, i just think if you worked more on lyrics/delivery you could make a more entertaining solid track... 1

^^^^ co-sign.... You never really switch up your flow, and its just a monotone spit. Idea was hella eminemish, and I wonder what your mother would say if she heard that track. :nono: Hook was different, very commercial, but thats Trip - and it was good to see something different like that. Work on flow and lyrics, not just basic lyrics (rhyming shit with bitch with shit and shit) and lose ya monotone flow. It felt repetative cause you never really switch it up. word.

^lmao @ what my mother would say. lol yea, she'd be pissed. but yea, thanks for feed. upppppppp..........

OMG I LOVE THIS TRACK LOL.. The hook is the best part .. lmao.. damn i would have wanted to drop on this.. lol... fun shit.. nice drop/... it was different and i liek it because of that

^you can get on a remix if you want. :cool: weerd.... Ugly Duckling's husband. or w/e lmao. but thanks for feed, yo.....

yo some funny ass shit lol...especially the intro...really good quality and good lyrics...really dope storytellin and i like how it ended wit the echo...dope shit dawg...8/10

^word...........................

yo this shit is pretty dope just dont like your style spul...but even tho your style is kinda sorry to me i like this shit.....if i knew you personally then i would download this...but seems like some earlier eminem shit...

triple is dope with chorus's

^haha it's all good. thx for feed. uppppppp